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  mary : untitled

inside out

mary said Jan 15, 2007, 6:04 AM:
 

my husband returns
slams the door against the storm
who called for this rain?

i flip through channels
for weather information
my windows rattle

glued to the blue screen
poor reception in the hail
that pounds on the roof

where is the weather?
football on all the channels
who watches the sky?
  Tru : Visionaire

Re: inside out

Tru said Jan 29, 2007, 5:50 PM:
 

I love the wittiness of these lines. Nice, lively and strong to identify with.

Great post Mary. Thanks!