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I'll make my brief little poetic statement regarding my haiku. I enjoy 5-7-5s and will write them. I consider those syllable counts maximums but will often write haiku with fewer syllables in each line (this from the understanding that in Japanese it's more common for a single word to have 5 syllables–or even 7, whereas in English it's much less common, so the form doesn't carry over very accurately from Japanese to English). I stick with haiku being imagistic but other than that anything goes. I enjoy experimentation. I've enjoyed writing haiku in the past, though have never been considered any good at it by anyone's estimation. Which is fine. To me, forms are primarily for play. Part of the beauty of haiku is that it makes one more aware of one's surroundings–always looking for something to turn into the next haiku. |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Dec 19, 2008, 9:06 AM: |
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Cooper's Hawk |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Dec 20, 2008, 8:12 AM: |
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Black curtains, dark morn |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Dec 21, 2008, 7:17 PM: |
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Broken trees |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Dec 22, 2008, 9:23 AM: |
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Cold morning |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Dec 22, 2008, 10:52 AM: |
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Cats under covers |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Dec 23, 2008, 12:52 PM: |
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Wilted pansies |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Dec 26, 2008, 12:13 PM: |
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paper crinkles |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Dec 26, 2008, 12:17 PM: |
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wide grassy field |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Dec 27, 2008, 6:53 AM: |
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coffee brewing |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Dec 27, 2008, 6:55 AM: |
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sunny day |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Dec 28, 2008, 3:28 PM: |
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floral couch |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Dec 28, 2008, 3:31 PM: |
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forest scent |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Dec 29, 2008, 9:03 AM: |
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candle flame |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Dec 29, 2008, 9:05 AM: |
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weight of blankets |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Dec 30, 2008, 11:59 AM: |
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smile |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Dec 31, 2008, 7:10 AM: |
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soft fur under hand |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Jan 1, 9:22 AM: |
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lazy winter night |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Jan 1, 11:19 AM: |
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dirty windshield |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Jan 1, 2:27 PM: |
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barren oak |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Jan 5, 12:12 PM: |
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Squirrels race |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Jan 6, 5:10 PM: |
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rain upon rain |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Jan 12, 2:59 PM: |
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itchy scarf |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Jan 13, 9:09 AM: |
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fresh scent |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Jan 14, 3:36 PM: |
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vacuum cleaner drone |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Jan 15, 8:33 AM: |
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sun and cool air |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Jan 16, 11:56 AM: |
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tingling nose |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Jan 19, 8:41 AM: |
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blue fading to black |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Jan 19, 8:43 AM: |
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bare trees |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Jan 20, 12:30 PM: |
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space heater white noise |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Jan 21, 11:37 AM: |
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pit bull asleep |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Jan 22, 7:07 AM: |
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Steam rising |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Jan 22, 12:19 PM: |
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crumbling sandstone set log border laid in place sun above |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Jan 22, 12:23 PM: |
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work gloves |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Jan 23, 12:53 PM: |
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skittering leaves |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Jan 24, 9:18 AM: |
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scraaaaape in the night |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Jan 25, 7:21 AM: |
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Wind in my hair |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Jan 26, 9:33 AM: |
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bass bows saw wildly |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Jan 26, 3:51 PM: |
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Sunshine on my skin |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Jan 27, 8:31 AM: |
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swinging wide the door |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Jan 27, 8:35 AM: |
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insects awaken |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Jan 28, 9:35 AM: |
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lamplight overhead |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Jan 29, 9:06 AM: |
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memory triggers |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Feb 1, 7:50 PM: |
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rakes and shovels |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Feb 1, 7:55 PM: |
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breaking ground |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Feb 3, 9:11 AM: |
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pen in my hand |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Feb 4, 1:03 PM: |
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Sun through west windows |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Feb 5, 7:26 PM: |
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Blanket flopping |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Feb 6, 2:23 PM: |
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robins chirping |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Feb 7, 3:02 PM: |
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Louder than traffic |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Feb 8, 4:28 PM: |
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pine cone littered ground |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Feb 8, 4:31 PM: |
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trail leads to creek |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Feb 9, 8:22 AM: |
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inhale the morning |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Feb 11, 12:08 PM: |
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jog behind tails |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Feb 11, 12:10 PM: |
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blast of wind |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Feb 12, 2:16 PM: |
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a few daffodils |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Feb 13, 12:40 PM: |
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eyes on dark soil |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Feb 15, 5:18 PM: |
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sore shoulders |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Feb 15, 5:22 PM: |
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strolling aisles |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Feb 17, 8:31 AM: |
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robins battling |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Feb 17, 8:34 AM: |
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robins hopping |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Feb 17, 8:41 AM: |
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stuck staring straight |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Feb 19, 9:40 AM: |
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dreams of roses |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Feb 19, 9:42 AM: |
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I want it all |
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Re: Jen's HaikuJen said Feb 21, 3:18 PM: |
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Leaving the trail |
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