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  Jen : Pursuing a Wealth of Health

Jen's Haiku

Jen said Dec 19, 2008, 9:00 AM:

 

I'll make my brief little poetic statement regarding my haiku. I enjoy 5-7-5s and will write them.  I consider those syllable counts maximums but will often write haiku with fewer syllables in each line (this from the understanding that in Japanese it's more common for a single word to have 5 syllables–or even 7, whereas in English it's much less common, so the form doesn't carry over very accurately from Japanese to English). I stick with haiku being imagistic but other than that anything goes. I enjoy experimentation. I've enjoyed writing haiku in the past, though have never been considered any good at it by anyone's estimation. Which is fine. To me, forms are primarily for play. Part of the beauty of haiku is that it makes one more aware of one's surroundings–always looking for something to turn into the next haiku.

As for the challenge, it's a haiku a day for a little over 2 1/2 years. I'm not the most reliable person for online projects, but I bet I can do that. One year when I was ill, I set myself the goal of writing as many poems in a year as Emily Dickinson did in her most productive year: 366. A poem a day +1. I'm busier now but a haiku a day seems like a good discipline for a generally pooped poet. Hopefully it will revive me. Thanks for making the suggestion, Samme.

Here's my first one:

Rain loosened
pecan hulls drop
plop pop

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Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Dec 19, 2008, 9:06 AM:

 

Cooper's Hawk
shadow between talons
rooted in the lawn

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Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Dec 20, 2008, 8:12 AM:

 

Black curtains, dark morn
drip, patter, drumming
slow awakening

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Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Dec 21, 2008, 7:17 PM:

 

Broken trees
remaining flood waters braid
mud

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Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Dec 21, 2008, 7:20 PM:

 

Brisk wind
Neighborhood barkers
Absent

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Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Dec 22, 2008, 9:23 AM:

 

Cold morning
Sunny window silhouettes
leap

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Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Dec 22, 2008, 10:52 AM:

 

Cats under covers
Dogs before space heaters
Wooly slippers

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Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Dec 23, 2008, 12:52 PM:

 

Wilted pansies
Fill form again next day
buds held aloft

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Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Dec 26, 2008, 12:13 PM:

 

paper crinkles
“thanks” “where did you find this?!” “cool”
warm sunlight

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Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Dec 26, 2008, 12:17 PM:

 

wide grassy field
small white dog zips, turns, zips
turns, zips at your call

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Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Dec 27, 2008, 6:53 AM:

 

coffee brewing
pile of cock-eyed papers
dormant cell phone

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Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Dec 27, 2008, 6:55 AM:

 

sunny day
cat yowling at the window
birds on the lawn

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Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Dec 28, 2008, 3:26 PM:

 

black curtains
smell of musk
a sigh

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Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Dec 28, 2008, 3:28 PM:

 

floral couch
puckered lump of blanket
black nose

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Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Dec 28, 2008, 3:31 PM:

 

forest scent
blue water rippling
cawk of heron

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Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Dec 29, 2008, 9:03 AM:

 

candle flame
berry scent set free
darkness flickering

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Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Dec 29, 2008, 9:05 AM:

 

weight of blankets
humming space heaters
dog sigh

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Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Dec 30, 2008, 8:13 AM:

 

bright dawn
walls glow
silence

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Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Dec 30, 2008, 11:59 AM:

 

smile
thin white hair brushed by the breeze
tears among wrinkles

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Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Dec 31, 2008, 7:10 AM:

 

soft fur under hand
glow of light on eyelids
gentle sighs

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Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Jan 1, 9:22 AM:

 

lazy winter night
pop crackle whizzzzz POP BANG pfft!
silent stars

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Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Jan 1, 11:19 AM:

 

dirty windshield
glare of oncoming headlights
pawprints

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Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Jan 1, 2:27 PM:

 

barren oak
a hawk breaks loose, wings spread wide
peace–and then one more

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Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Jan 5, 12:12 PM:

 

Squirrels race
Branches dip, bob, and sway
Fluffy tails spin

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Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Jan 6, 5:10 PM:

 

rain upon rain
ditches become rivers
lamplight smears

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Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Jan 8, 9:34 AM:

 

misted mirror
warm rosy skin
cool draft

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Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Jan 8, 9:38 AM:

 

whipping branches
whipping hair
head down

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Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Jan 9, 9:07 AM:

 

ticking clock
humming computer
busy screen

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Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Jan 12, 2:59 PM:

 

itchy scarf
chilly breeze ruffling grasses
sound of traffic

  Jen : Pursuing a Wealth of Health

Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Jan 13, 9:09 AM:

 

fresh scent
white frost covers all
car and grass blades

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Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Jan 14, 3:36 PM:

 

vacuum cleaner drone
bright daylight through windows
no obstacles

  Jen : Pursuing a Wealth of Health

Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Jan 15, 8:33 AM:

 

sun and cool air
piles of russet leaves
children laughing

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Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Jan 16, 11:56 AM:

 

tingling nose
sting of cold on bare skin
empty mailbox

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Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Jan 19, 8:41 AM:

 

blue fading to black
a warm breeze caressing all
faint stars

  Jen : Pursuing a Wealth of Health

Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Jan 19, 8:43 AM:

 

bare trees
brown grasses shaped by wind
warm sun on cool cheeks

  Jen : Pursuing a Wealth of Health

Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Jan 20, 12:30 PM:

 

space heater white noise
white sunlight on light walls
cold draft

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Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Jan 21, 11:37 AM:

 

pit bull asleep

lunge rawf!! lunge lunge rawf!! rawf! rawf

grrrrrr mph

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Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Jan 22, 7:07 AM:

 

Steam rising

Hands warm down to fingertips

Coco

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Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Jan 22, 12:19 PM:

 

crumbling sandstone set

log border laid in place

sun above

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Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Jan 22, 12:23 PM:

 

work gloves

wheelbarrow moving rocks

garden emerging

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Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Jan 23, 12:53 PM:

 

skittering leaves

hair whipped across my face

spring approaches

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Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Jan 24, 9:18 AM:

 

scraaaaape in the night

I stalk the house for bogeys

all is still

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Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Jan 25, 7:21 AM:

 

Wind in my hair

The zipping sound of bike tires

Glee in my soul

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Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Jan 26, 9:33 AM:

 

bass bows saw wildly

conductor hops on his stand

thunderstorm rolls in

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Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Jan 26, 3:51 PM:

 

Sunshine on my skin

Scent of water in the air

where are the flowers

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Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Jan 27, 8:31 AM:

 

swinging wide the door

inhaling weak morning sun

warm air and good news

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Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Jan 27, 8:35 AM:

 

insects awaken

cats bat at shadows on drapes

bugs that can’t be caught

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Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Jan 28, 9:35 AM:

 

lamplight overhead
writing pad on my lap
heating pad against my back

  Jen : Pursuing a Wealth of Health

Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Jan 29, 9:06 AM:

 

memory triggers
images from magazines
send thoughts near and far

  Jen : Pursuing a Wealth of Health

Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Jan 30, 9:21 AM:

 

dimmed lights
soothing music
painful prodding

  Jen : Pursuing a Wealth of Health

Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Feb 1, 7:50 PM:

 

rakes and shovels
quiet companionship
bare ground

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Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Feb 1, 7:53 PM:

 

chores and weariness
kisses and embraces
union

  Jen : Pursuing a Wealth of Health

Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Feb 1, 7:55 PM:

 

breaking ground
raking out rocks and debris
spreading good soil

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Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Feb 3, 9:11 AM:

 

pen in my hand
cats on my lap and chest
no way to be sad

  Jen : Pursuing a Wealth of Health

Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Feb 3, 9:16 AM:

 

squandering
or a path to plenty
or a letting go

  Jen : Pursuing a Wealth of Health

Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Feb 4, 1:03 PM:

 

Sun through west windows
cats sleeping on the bed
squeaky school bus brakes

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Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Feb 5, 7:26 PM:

 

Blanket flopping
snarling and twisting
black nose appears

  Jen : Pursuing a Wealth of Health

Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Feb 6, 2:23 PM:

 

robins chirping
dogs laid out in the sun
tips of tulip spears

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Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Feb 7, 3:02 PM:

 

Louder than traffic
Peepers announcing spring
Leafless trees

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Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Feb 8, 4:28 PM:

 

pine cone littered ground
 
rustling of calf-deep leaves
 
at last a trail

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Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Feb 8, 4:31 PM:

 

trail leads to creek
 
falls above falls above pool
 
and secrets beyond

  Jen : Pursuing a Wealth of Health

Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Feb 9, 8:22 AM:

 

inhale the morning
without expectation
juice of beginnings

  Jen : Pursuing a Wealth of Health

Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Feb 11, 12:08 PM:

 

jog behind tails
jog into the warm day
walk home

  Jen : Pursuing a Wealth of Health

Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Feb 11, 12:10 PM:

 

blast of wind
creakings and scrapings
dogs alert

  Jen : Pursuing a Wealth of Health

Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Feb 12, 2:16 PM:

 

a few daffodils
forsythia’s little pops
wet earth

  Jen : Pursuing a Wealth of Health

Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Feb 12, 2:18 PM:

 

open field
open blue sky
wide open run

  Jen : Pursuing a Wealth of Health

Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Feb 13, 12:40 PM:

 

eyes on dark soil
dark hair absorbing sun
dirty hands

  Jen : Pursuing a Wealth of Health

Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Feb 15, 5:18 PM:

 

sore shoulders
 
ground covered with mulch
 
waiting to plant

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Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Feb 15, 5:22 PM:

 

strolling aisles
of feed, seed, tools of the earth
land of dreams

  Jen : Pursuing a Wealth of Health

Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Feb 17, 8:31 AM:

 

robins battling
tiny birds too fast to see
a dove roosting

  Jen : Pursuing a Wealth of Health

Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Feb 17, 8:34 AM:

 

robins hopping
kinglets flitting among twigs
waxwings in treetops

  Jen : Pursuing a Wealth of Health

Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Feb 17, 8:41 AM:

 

stuck staring straight
I miss the earth and the sky
roots and wings

  Jen : Pursuing a Wealth of Health

Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Feb 19, 9:40 AM:

 

dreams of roses
shovels and picks, sand and block
dreams of riches

  Jen : Pursuing a Wealth of Health

Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Feb 19, 9:42 AM:

 

I want it all
iris and lilies, foxglove
roses and poppies

  Jen : Pursuing a Wealth of Health

Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Feb 21, 3:18 PM:

 

Leaving the trail
Getting comfortably lost
shade and light as guides

  Jen : Pursuing a Wealth of Health

Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Feb 21, 3:26 PM:

 

bare forest
sequestered cove
coots scatter

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Re: Jen's Haiku

Jen said Feb 23, 2:14 PM:

 

Sweet cocoon morning
Pretending no work awaits
Only sun-drenched books