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  Happiness : Virtual Architect

OLDER THAN MEMORY, OLDER THAN TIME

Happiness said May 1, 2007, 6:55 AM:

 
Posted on May 1st, 2007 by AlexNoble : Writer AlexNoble
Temple_belle___garden

 

The temple feels

 1000 years old,

older than memory,

older than time,

deep and dark

from some forgotten future.

 

It smells of sacred shadows,

sweet sandalwood,

sanctuary and eucalyptus.

It smells of the Grail.

 

There is always a candle

burning on the altar,

underneath a portrait

of Lord Krishna,

with his loving eyes.

 

At sunset, I sit alone,

listening to nuns from the convent

chant vedic hymns.

 

 

 

Alex Noble


 

An Excerpt from the Twenty Third Century Novel

From “The Book of Forbidden Poems”


 

Copyright C 2007 by Alex Noble.  All rights reserved in all media.

 

  Sandra : Inspirational Ambassador

Re: OLDER THAN MEMORY, OLDER THAN TIME

Sandra said May 3, 2007, 9:52 AM:

 

Beautiful. Makes me want to be there, makes me feel like I am there.

Sandra

  Tom : Mesocosmic Traveller

Re: OLDER THAN MEMORY, OLDER THAN TIME

Tom said May 3, 2007, 10:05 PM:

 

That poem has a sound like a Chinese bell. It rings with age. I love a tone piece, and the tone of your poem is perfect for a sacred space. The esses run through it like whispers.

Thanks Alex!

Tom

  Mike : Ideas, ideas, ideas...

Re: OLDER THAN MEMORY, OLDER THAN TIME

Mike said May 23, 2007, 6:01 AM:

 

I second Sandra, I feel there.  I can here the nuns and feel the peace.
~Mike