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DIVING DEEPER: A Writing Workshop

Do you feel compelled to write,  but something is stopping you from getting on with it?

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  valli : almost still eager

voices

valli said Jul 16, 2008, 5:30 AM:

 


1 – be still, really . do you see?
you are the play ground . things that
you sidestepped in tomorrows
fissured stretches , find  each  other
 
they now play, as fingers sink into your
giving . all the bad stuff gets  mixed  up
and you switch sides as you fall .
one switch is always on , on two sides

2 – you need to be close to the edge
if you are not you will get there anyway
if you push it you will
  worship the bizzare

only thing to do
is be real close
disambiguous . exhilarated by weakness,
never reaching

do you hear voices tween silences? please do post them here . i had to fix them though when they trailed away………..

  Zipperupus : Secret Chief

Re: voices

Zipperupus said Jul 20, 2008, 1:48 PM:

 

I love this piece. I feel it in my gut, understand it in my heart, but my mind can not grasp it… therefore, this is an excellent poem!

Love,

Zip

  ananda : Inspiriter

Re: voices

ananda said Jul 20, 2008, 3:03 PM:

 

awesome awesome makes me dizzy but I don't care ~

Love this:

things that
you sidestepped in tomorrows
fissured stretches , find  each  other
 
they now play, as fingers sink into your
giving

and

be real close
disambiguous

Love disambiguous. Awesomeawesome

Namaste,
Claire

  valli : almost still eager

Re: voices

valli said Jul 22, 2008, 5:38 AM:

 


hi zip, hi claire

wow . i got joy . thank u thankyou.

a verse ?? :)

love, v