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DIVING DEEPER: A Writing Workshop

Do you feel compelled to write,  but something is stopping you from getting on with it?

Do you feel you have a story to tell, or simply something 'to say' but don't know how to start, or how to continue?

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  Ramsses : Orion

Rock Stars

Ramsses said Mar 15, 10:27 PM:

 

No music teacher taught the bird to sing,
Nor gave the myna royal dignity,
The awesome beauty of a loving heart
And mystic eyes to see beyond the world.

  siafu   : si@fu

Re: Rock Stars

siafu said Mar 16, 11:01 PM:

 

who perceives them as such?

@~)

  Ramsses : Orion

Re: Rock Stars

Ramsses said Mar 17, 4:44 PM:

 

Nebuchadnezzar.

  siafu   : si@fu

Re: Rock Stars

siafu said Mar 17, 11:02 PM:

 

oh r!! steady on the medication!

that was a serious line of enquiry by the way..

@~)

  Nishtha : Imaginative Mellifluous Philosopher

Re: Rock Stars

Nishtha said Mar 18, 1:27 AM:

 

Mystic eyes to see beyond the world — siafu asks “who” perceives them as such? … I believe you have answered the question, Ramsses, and siafu may need to ponder the question longer until the answer appears (for some it comes quickly, for others, not as quickly, kind of like staring at those mathematical images where the three-dimensional image shows up amidst the multiple miniatured images ;-)

Remember Two Things

  jenni : hello

Re: Rock Stars

jenni said Mar 18, 6:01 AM:

 

I never know quite what to say when
I read your words, but they stir something inside of me.
So usually I say nothing.

  Ramsses : Orion

Re: Rock Stars

Ramsses said Mar 18, 9:41 AM:

 

Don't underestimate Nebuchadnezzar, Antony. He knows things.
Thank you, Nishtha.
I love you, Jenni.

  Ramsses : Orion

Re: Rock Stars

Ramsses said Mar 20, 9:31 AM:

 

I have a tendency to fall in love,
So forgive me my attachment to you,
Which no longer can be called attachment,
Since I no longer have the tendency.

  Ramsses : Orion

Re: Rock Stars

Ramsses said Mar 20, 5:40 PM:

 

Monet's waterlilies, bright galaxies,
Blooming in deep blue universes,
Roman's emerging from living waters, 
Flowers from the heart of eternity.

  Ramsses : Orion

Re: Rock Stars

Ramsses said Mar 20, 8:33 PM:

 

(the official version)

Monet's waterlilies, bright galaxies,
Blooming anew on a river of light,
Flowers from the heart of eternity, 
Fiery offerings on living waters.

  Ramsses : Orion

Re: Rock Stars

Ramsses said Mar 20, 9:43 PM:

 

For Roman's “Golden Poppies” (we're on a roll):

Golden poppies in a stained glass window,
The dusky gleams of multicolored gems,
Deep purple, green and red of royalty,
One fleeting moment frozen hard in time.

  Ramsses : Orion

Re: Rock Stars

Ramsses said Mar 20, 11:07 PM:

 

You can be in pain without suffering,
I am dimly starting to understand,
And this could be a great revelation,
If only I could fully accept it.

  rudyan : quasar

Re: Rock Stars

rudyan said Mar 21, 11:28 AM:

 

Yes. Love it.

  rudyan : quasar

Re: Rock Stars

rudyan said Mar 21, 11:33 AM:

 

I love the warmth, richness, permanence of the stained glass image and colours against “One fleeting moment frozen hard in time.”

(Hmm, how did this comment end up here? I'm referring of course to the quatrain on Roman's “Golden Poppies.”)

  Ramsses : Orion

Re: Rock Stars

Ramsses said Mar 21, 5:58 PM:

 

I'm amazed. Thank you, Ruth. I felt like such a hack writing those verses.

  rudyan : quasar

Re: Rock Stars

rudyan said Mar 21, 6:54 PM:

 

I'm amazed you're amazed. :)

I'm in awe of your *hack writing*, big R, wish it would rub off on me a bit.

  Ramsses : Orion

Re: Rock Stars

Ramsses said Mar 22, 12:00 PM:

 

Dear Ruth,

I am sending you a special powder composed of Nile mud and Tut's penis. Rub it all over your body and don't wash for a week. Every word from your mouth, your pen, or the fingertips on your keyboard will be scripture.

Love,
Ramsses

  rudyan : quasar

Re: Rock Stars

rudyan said Mar 22, 12:21 PM:

 

Ah Chris, thank you. You are a true friend!

I can see I'm going to have to arrange a forest camp-out for the duration; the kind of animals I'm likely to meet there won't mind so much if I smell like the great unwashed for a week.

So between your powder and my already existing *gospelwriter* designation (referring to my address on gaia), this should do the trick? Or do you think the (self-)designation may actually be a hindrance to my betterment?

Sincerely (and with much love),
Ruth

  Ramsses : Orion

Re: Rock Stars

Ramsses said Mar 22, 1:06 PM:

 

Put comlete faith in the powder. I'll send you my photo. You can meditate on that. The animals won't bother you.

  Ramsses : Orion

Re: Rock Stars

Ramsses said Mar 24, 3:28 PM:

 

Roman's “Trail to Romance”

Over the hills to a happy ocean,
Flowery fields falling down to the coast,
Winding away to a misty distance,
Where the sun lights the clouds on the water.

  Ramsses : Orion

Re: Rock Stars

Ramsses said Mar 24, 11:34 PM:

 

In a twilight thicket I searched for You,
When I saw You briefly and in disguise,
Leaving me in the deepening darkness
Until I found You again by my side.

  Ramsses : Orion

Re: Rock Stars

Ramsses said May 3, 6:28 PM:

 

A freight train rumbling over the mountains
Into the sweltering air of the field,
Colossal in invisibility,
Evanescent and irresistible.

  Ramsses : Orion

Re: Rock Stars

Ramsses said May 8, 10:43 PM:

 

They gave Him vinegar to quench His thirst,
And I also have done something like that
To a Saint who blessed me in India,
When I gave Her nothing for Her hunger.

  Ramsses : Orion

Re: Rock Stars

Ramsses said May 10, 2:10 PM:

 

Now it's me happy to be free from you,
However long it's taken to get here,
So many desperate dives in the well,
Until I found where the water came from.

  Ramsses : Orion

Re: Rock Stars

Ramsses said May 12, 10:07 AM:

 

There's no question the devils rigged the towers,
Waiting like a spider in her web,
So arrogant and greedy for the prize,
They had to give surprise an extra power.

  Ramsses : Orion

Re: Rock Stars

Ramsses said May 12, 6:29 PM:

 

A restless wind wanders through the poppies,
Where nature blooms in careless profusion,
Petals ruffling to an unheard music,
The scattered blooms of an unseen order.

  Ramsses : Orion

Re: Rock Stars

Ramsses said May 16, 7:30 PM:

 

Medicines made of colloidal metals,
Uprecedented pain from the cleansing,
A healing so far beyond acceptance,
All systems at all levels go beserk.

  jenni : hello

Re: Rock Stars

jenni said May 19, 4:57 PM:

 

I love a poppy. I can see it ruffling.

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  Ramsses : Orion

Re: Rock Stars

Ramsses said May 19, 7:29 PM:

 

.

Morning-breeze_1_
  Ramsses : Orion

Re: Rock Stars

Ramsses said May 19, 9:14 PM:

 

Just give me the medication, doctor,
Or I'll take it myself if I have to,
And I don't mean your pharmaceuticals,
Or even certain plants, for that matter.

  jenni : hello

Re: Rock Stars

jenni said May 20, 8:19 AM:

 

I love that painting and your poetry

  Ramsses : Orion

Re: Rock Stars

Ramsses said May 20, 7:29 PM:

 

xoxo

  Ramsses : Orion

Re: Rock Stars

Ramsses said May 21, 10:24 AM:

 

There are such depths to this epiphany,
Beyond my conscious intentions or yours,
That now we ride the event horizon
Of all that I predicted and forgot.

  Ramsses : Orion

Re: Rock Stars

Ramsses said May 22, 7:17 PM:

 

It gets fuzzy fast around the edges,
Your flaming genius or paranoid nut,
Psychic enemies in all dimensions
Attacking him because he holds the light.

  Ramsses : Orion

Re: Rock Stars

Ramsses said May 24, 12:32 PM:

 

All else follows with a swipe like lightening,
Quicker than thought or the flick of its tongue,
A venomous serpent writhing in a fist,
And ages ended in a labyrinth.

  Ramsses : Orion

Re: Rock Stars

Ramsses said May 27, 10:56 PM:

 

You and I through fields of poppies wander
To a distant home in a quiet wood,
Where a bell tolls in the further distance,
So quietly you may never hear it.

  jenni : hello

Re: Rock Stars

jenni said May 28, 4:16 AM:

 

that is pretty

  Ramsses : Orion

Re: Rock Stars

Ramsses said Jun 3, 10:37 AM:

 

I grew these golden poppies in my heart
Before I planted them in my garden,
Unearthly in their strange intelligence,
So knowing in their freedom from this world.

  Sandra : Inspirational Ambassador

Re: Rock Stars

Sandra said Jun 4, 7:26 AM:

 

I don't know why but this makes me want to cry.

Feeling like something has flown over to me and said, 'it's okay, it's all okay'.  I realise that this isn't what the poem is saying specifically. I think it's about the 'voice' coming through - a kind of vibration underneath the words that speaks to me, saying something along the lines of 'I know, I've been there, I understand'.

xo

  Ramsses : Orion

Re: Rock Stars

Ramsses said Jun 4, 10:32 AM:

 

Yes. The writing took me by surprise. Another one of Roman's wonderful paintings. What could I say about it? He told me how he grew the poppies first in his inner sanctuary. The words just unfolded. He loves this verse.

  Ramsses : Orion

Re: Rock Stars

Ramsses said Jun 7, 12:06 PM:

 

In the darkness Your car turns the corner,
You in the back seat, strangely attentive,
Me waving calmly from the sidewalk,
So casually, Your companion jumps.

  Ramsses : Orion

Re: Rock Stars

Ramsses said Jun 12, 7:37 PM:

 

It's when the flowers start talking to you
That the world opens up like a blossom,
All beauty infinitely possible,
Everything unfolding before your eyes.

  Ramsses : Orion

Re: Rock Stars

Ramsses said Jun 14, 7:59 PM:

 

Boats moored at the bottom of steep stone steps,
Flowers spilling over a high sea wall,
Another island across the water,
Close like the love of your life returning.

  Ramsses : Orion

Re: Rock Stars

Ramsses said Jun 16, 7:03 PM:

 

Where fine stems, leaves and flowers glow like gems,
And mynas are the sweetest hearts on wings,
In that garden where no sorrow visits
I remember how You first spoke my name.

  Ramsses : Orion

Re: Rock Stars

Ramsses said Jun 18, 10:31 PM:

 

Though yet of our dear cousin Hamlet's death
The memory be green, we bid farewell
To that which nature must in due course take,
And seize upon the urgency of life.

  Ramsses : Orion

Re: Rock Stars

Ramsses said Jun 20, 7:20 PM:

 

And if some unanticipated bell
Should summon me to Heaven or to Hell,
'Twould be no interruption to my dreams,
Where You are all and all else only seems. 

  Ramsses : Orion

Re: Rock Stars

Ramsses said Jun 22, 10:40 AM:

 

And what if You should leave this world, Mother,
When I perchance have means to be with You,
After so much grief of separation
The final heartbreak of a hopeless life.

  Ramsses : Orion

Re: Rock Stars

Ramsses said Jun 24, 11:16 PM:

 

Mother, I remember my first darshan,
How You disarmed me by Your innocence,
And I, so fascinated by Your love,
Resisted what was irresistible.

  Ramsses : Orion

Re: Rock Stars

Ramsses said Jun 25, 7:05 PM:

 

It's beyond wild to stumble upon this,
That only wishes to be stumbled on,
And rebukes you for the impertinence
Of thinking you had done this on your own.

  ayla : Illuminated Skye

Re: Rock Stars

ayla said Jun 27, 3:54 PM:

 

I haven't been here in so long, drop in, find a Rock Star, am filled with so many feelings.  I laugh.  I cry.  I stick my bottom lip out because that is sad.  I sigh because that is so beautiful.  I wonder if I could have some magic powder to rub all over me and I'll go join Ruthie in the forest.

  Ramsses : Orion

Re: Rock Stars

Ramsses said Jun 27, 8:07 PM:

 

Sorry, no more powder. There is, however, one alternative even better than Tut's. Mine. Live. Just for you, darling.

You've had to pull all the levers for me,
Even this guy from another planet
With his high age healing technology
That works but isn't like being with You.

  Ramsses : Orion

Re: Rock Stars

Ramsses said Jun 30, 2:26 PM:

 

The scariest part of being crazy
Is that some of it you don't remember,
And all I can remember now, Mother,
Is how you appreared in a great darkness.

  Ramsses : Orion

Re: Rock Stars

Ramsses said Jul 1, 10:53 AM:

 

Having seen what I have seen, I know things,
Mottled mountainsides the more beautiful
For a lovely girl who became Krishna
For a time, You who are also Devi.

  Ramsses : Orion

Re: Rock Stars

Ramsses said Jul 2, 11:34 AM:

 

When a cobra rises from my forehead,
I will think that I am worthy of You,
The sun that rises over the mountains,
And the cat that watches me in the night.

  Ramsses : Orion

Re: Rock Stars

Ramsses said Jul 3, 9:47 PM:

 

Enough impersonation for the world,
I am not at all how others see me,
Only You, whom I love with all my heart,
Know the wobbles of the silent planets.

  Sandra : Inspirational Ambassador

Re: Rock Stars

Sandra said Jul 5, 3:34 AM:

 

Only You, whom I love with all my heart,
Know the wobbles of the silent planets

exquisite, truly.

  Ramsses : Orion

Re: Rock Stars

Ramsses said Jul 5, 9:30 AM:

 

How did I know you would like that?

  Sandra : Inspirational Ambassador

Re: Rock Stars

Sandra said Jul 5, 10:52 AM:

 

;-)