empty rooms

now I can open 
the windows and 
let the light in.
sweep the floors
clean finally
once and for all

there is no
impedance
to clutter
the curtains will
flutter in the wind


I will look out the
window at the
blue sky on the horizon
and i will find
peace in
these empty rooms

Re: empty rooms

The paradox of finding peace in the emptiness of spaces. There is a wonderful intuition moving through this poem jenni. Of that sense. Beautiful. Ron

Re: empty rooms

thank you so much, ron,
for taking to time to read this and for your thoughtful, as always 
comment.
jen

Re: empty rooms

I found this touching. For me it talked about something that has moved out and peace entering the stage on its place. Letting the fresh air and sun into a room says much.

Lovely. Thanx for the read.

xo

Re: empty rooms

thanks so much nono. so good to see your face. you are right.