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“A haiku is not a poem, it is not literature; it is a hand beckoning, a door half-opened, a mirror wiped clean. It is a way of returning to nature, to our moon nature, our cheery blossom nature, our falling leaf nature; in short, to our Buddha nature. It is a way in which the cold winter
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  Davidu : Skysign

Snow corn

Davidu said Jan 1, 2008, 10:05 AM:
 


 

I've never written haiku before, but I thought I might give it a try.  Here goes:






Snow corn in winter

Sparrows swoop and sweep the chill

In and out merging

  Balder : Kosmonaut

Re: Snow corn

Balder said Jan 1, 2008, 10:41 AM:
 

Beautiful start, David!  I hope you try more ….

I may give a hand sometime at TSK haiku… :-)
  Happiness : Virtual Architect

Re: Snow corn

Happiness said Jan 1, 2008, 10:59 AM:
 

David !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  This is great.  IN fact, now that you have written the words, they synergize with your beautiful painting to create 'something more.'  Bows & bravo.
  Davidu : Skysign

Re: Snow corn

Davidu said Jan 1, 2008, 11:26 AM:
 

Ha, ha!  Thanks you two.  Great fun! 

David
  Davidu : Skysign

Re: Snow corn

Davidu said Jan 3, 2008, 1:05 PM:
 

Blustery wind-brushed field
Where corn goes gold, and birds swoop -
I misplaced my self
  Wil : unEYEr1

Re: Snow corn

Wil said Jan 30, 2008, 7:38 PM:
 

I flew in the frame
encountered beautiful prose
enjoyed emmensely