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Re: NEH VII - Friendship Haiku Part 2

http://druidcircle.gaia.com — Sun, 21 Jun 2009 10:28:22 GMT

when friendship unites
like minds linking together
fresh new memories

Re: NEH VII - Friendship Haiku Part 2

http://Steven-Caylor.gaia.com — Sat, 20 Jun 2009 16:52:00 GMT

psychic connections
an inkling, intuition;
an understanding

an understanding
doesn't always call for words
when friendship unites

Re: NEH VII - Friendship Haiku Part 2

http://Steven-Caylor.gaia.com — Sat, 20 Jun 2009 16:02:00 GMT

notifications?
oH! knowing without knowing!
psychic connections

Re: NEH VII - Friendship Haiku Part 2

http://armila.gaia.com — Tue, 09 Jun 2009 02:34:31 GMT

Disappeared for a while but did read. Thank you all for gliding in and warming up the friendship haiku river.

Even as we touch
syncopated heartbeats
notifications?

Re: NEH VII - Friendship Haiku Part 2

http://jikishin.gaia.com — Mon, 08 Jun 2009 17:59:20 GMT

joining haiku chain
the missing link is present
even as we touch

Re: NEH VII - Friendship Haiku Part 2

http://druidcircle.gaia.com — Mon, 08 Jun 2009 07:06:02 GMT

i will be your friend
journey of life never ends
joining haiku chain

Re: NEH VII - Friendship Haiku Part 2

http://magically.gaia.com — Sun, 07 Jun 2009 23:18:19 GMT

a solid knowledge
warm, easy, kind and infinite
i will be your friend

Re: NEH VII - Friendship Haiku Part 2

http://fastdarter.gaia.com — Sun, 07 Jun 2009 13:47:28 GMT

gift of true springtime
calls to me from google mail
it's a mystery

It's a mystery
haikugarden pokes at me
Notifications?

Re: NEH VII - Friendship Haiku Part 2

http://druidcircle.gaia.com — Sun, 07 Jun 2009 11:46:34 GMT

time to plant the seed
sunshine buds open and full
gift of true springtime

Re: NEH VII - Friendship Haiku Part 2

http://iljung.gaia.com — Sun, 07 Jun 2009 10:11:27 GMT

earth is full and young
spring sprouts out, shouts out sing song
time to plant the seed

Re: NEH VII - Friendship Haiku Part 2

http://druidcircle.gaia.com — Sun, 07 Jun 2009 08:11:39 GMT

center and align
tufted birds laying in nest
earth is full and young

Haiku Guidelines

http://siona.gaia.com — Thu, 04 Jun 2009 16:43:17 GMT

I found this wonderful list of what Haiku isn't (and is) some time ago, and it's guided my own Haiku ever since. Enjoy!

Haiku:

1. Haiku isn't a prose sentence divided Into 3 lines of 5-7-5 syllables, nor a “dribble of prose.” Haiku is an art form that requires study and discipline.

2. Haiku isn't always divided into 5-7-5 syllables. The 5-7-5 count refers to the Japanese onji (symbol/sound) not to English language syllables. It is usually in a short/long/short form. It isn't “padded” with modifiers to make the count come out right.

3. Haiku isn't poetics (in the English-language-poetry sense) but is pure poetry.

4. Haiku isn't simile or metaphor. Simile and metaphor turn haiku into English-poetics.

5. Haiku isn't an intellectual statement. It is an intuitive response to nature.

6. Haiku isn't a picture postcard or a “pretty picture”. It is a moment of heightened awareness which may be shared by the reader. It should have depths of meaning.

7. Haiku isn't a three-line poem with the first or last line a title for the other two. All three lines should be necessary to the clarity of the haiku. Don't waste word-space.

8. Haiku isn't summed-up by the poet's intellectual comment regarding the experience. It is left open-ended, so that the reader can share in its creation.

9. Haiku isn't a clutter of words strung together to get a 5-7-5 syllable count, or a staccato tongue-twister. Haiku should flow, especially when read aloud. It doesn't rhyme, except rarely. Avoid run-on lines. Take the time to write haiku without them.

10. Haiku isn't a mechanical poetry with rhythms (i.e. iambic pentameter) but the line endings should be as complete a thought as possible, with the total poem as the total expression. Haiku requires polishing! “Anything worth doing is worth doing well”.

11. Haiku isn't of human values, morals, judgments, comments, etc. It isn't an epigram or a couplet. It isn't didactic, either overtly or covertly. It is of Nature & the “Nature of Things”. Capturing the “Nature of Things” is the essence of good haiku.

12. Haiku isn't anthropomorphic, as English-language poetry. No humanizing of nature or personification! Rather, Naturalize human beings. This is a subtle difference.

13. Haiku isn't a generalization about something. It is a specific thing/time/place/season/event. It is nature poetry in the Japanese sense (ZEN-like). It is in the present moment.

14. Haiku isn't a “tell-all”. It is indicating by not saying. Show, don't tell.

15. Haiku isn't obscure. The season (ki) should be named, or a season-word (kigo) used. The reader should be able to co-create the mood/season/event. Be specific. Don't say “tree” if you mean elm; don't say “bird” if you mean wren, for instance. The thing/time/place/season should be apparent to the reader. Avoid “this” or “that” bird/insect/leaf etc. Unnecessary.

16. Haiku isn't a “pretty picture”, nor is it deliberately grim for the sake of “showing off”. It is an interplay between two or more things/objects in a state of unresolved tension - don't tell the reader how to react, or feel; leave the reader something to co-create.

17. Haiku isn't just anything that comes to mind. It is a specific enlightened experience shared with the reader. It is heightened awareness not imaginary images. It IS what is going on right here/right now, not a day-dream or exposition.

18. Use no unnecessary words, that overlap or say the same thing such as April/Spring, Winter/Snow. Each word should have value & importance. Choose carefully.

19. Haiku isn't just a “little poem” by anyone who can count to 17. The Masters of the Art worked at it, sometimes an entire lifetime.

20. Haiku isn't easy to write, but when you get “hooked” you'll be glad you tried it. The study & discipline sharpen the perception & improve all other fields of writing, as well as adding zest to living. Haiku is what is!

blossom unfolded

http://quietlaughter.gaia.com — Mon, 18 May 2009 02:14:06 GMT

blossoms unfolded
apple's first blush on the branch
unborn fruit waiting

Re: NEH VII - Friendship Haiku Part 2

http://druidcircle.gaia.com — Fri, 15 May 2009 08:56:15 GMT

solutions emerge
problems solve, back to balance
center and align

Re: NEH VII - Friendship Haiku Part 2

http://armila.gaia.com — Fri, 15 May 2009 07:03:53 GMT

Light colours shine bright
when friends gather together
there's optimism

There's optimism
friends see opportunities
solutions emerge

Re: NEH VII - Friendship Haiku Part 2

http://druidcircle.gaia.com — Wed, 06 May 2009 11:06:07 GMT

yellow, green, blue, white
many colours opening up
light colours shine bright

Re: NEH VII - Friendship Haiku Part 2

http://Steven-Caylor.gaia.com — Tue, 05 May 2009 17:17:54 GMT

sparks of Divine Bliss
5-break mortar shells burst: red
yellow, green, blue, white

Re: NEH VII - Friendship Haiku Part 2

http://druidcircle.gaia.com — Sat, 02 May 2009 15:21:41 GMT

spinning and glowing
like bright fireworks in the night
sparks of divine bliss

Re: NEH VII - Friendship Haiku Part 2

http://MamaSue.gaia.com — Sat, 02 May 2009 14:42:13 GMT

happiness so bright
emanating from chakras
spinning and glowing

Re: NEH VII - Friendship Haiku Part 2

http://druidcircle.gaia.com — Fri, 01 May 2009 16:18:36 GMT

my favourite one
tranquility is so right
happiness so bright