Gaia: HAIKU - Haiku - All Styles Welcome - Snow corn

Re: Snow corn

http://wil.gaia.com — Thu, 31 Jan 2008 03:38:45 GMT

I flew in the frame
encountered beautiful prose
enjoyed emmensely

Re: Snow corn

http://Davidu.gaia.com — Thu, 03 Jan 2008 21:05:08 GMT

Blustery wind-brushed field
Where corn goes gold, and birds swoop -
I misplaced my self

Re: Snow corn

http://Davidu.gaia.com — Tue, 01 Jan 2008 19:26:56 GMT

Ha, ha! Thanks you two. Great fun!

David

Re: Snow corn

http://camphappiness.gaia.com — Tue, 01 Jan 2008 18:59:12 GMT

David !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is great. IN fact, now that you have written the words, they synergize with your beautiful painting to create 'something more.' Bows & bravo.

Re: Snow corn

http://brucealderman.gaia.com — Tue, 01 Jan 2008 18:41:53 GMT

Beautiful start, David! I hope you try more ....

I may give a hand sometime at TSK haiku... :-)

Snow corn

http://Davidu.gaia.com — Tue, 01 Jan 2008 18:05:22 GMT

I've never written haiku before, but I thought I might give it a try. Here goes:

Snow corn in winter

Sparrows swoop and sweep the chill

In and out merging