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Hidden

one [no longer around] said Oct 14, 2007, 9:07 PM:
 

 

I've been working a little in traditional Haiku.

Here is one that is just about done.

Tell me what you think.



Hidden


A mystery shown,

Mountain aspen waving gold,

Black bear vanished there.





(C)  Wise Bearded One, 2007
  Shannon : Succulent Dancer

Re: Hidden

Shannon said Oct 15, 2007, 3:58 AM:
 

I love it!  You make me want to write Haikus!  That's the highest compliment I can give.  :)

Shannon
 

Re: Hidden

one [no longer around] said Oct 18, 2007, 8:57 PM:
 


 

Thanks for your supportive reply.

I confess that I am a little shy of posting anything.

That fear of criticism is a powerful thing.

Thanks for being so positive and welcoming.


David
 

Re: Hidden

riet [no longer around] said Oct 16, 2007, 6:08 AM:
 

I love Haiku, It is such a misterious way to express one's thoughts.
I loved reading 'Hidden' it paints a wonderful picture. The colors are warm and sound melodious.
  Tink : Poet of Youth

Re: Hidden

Tink said Oct 18, 2007, 11:22 AM:
 

I like it! Haikus are tricky….it seems they are either really good or lack any form of meaning. This one falls in the first category =)
  Sam : River

Re: Hidden

Sam said Oct 18, 2007, 5:12 PM:
 

Nice.  It makes me want to read more…do you have more yet?
 

Re: Hidden

one [no longer around] said Oct 18, 2007, 9:00 PM:
 


 

Thanks for being so positive and welcoming.

I will post some more.


David