Congragulations. I finished reading it right now. I found myself engaged in it. I thaought you build it up well. Using relationship, you moved the reader slowly to where you wanted. And also you have some good messages hidden in your work (drugs) and how hanging out with positive or worse, negative people influences us. I cannot wait to read more of your work. They were minor typos, but you said it's a rought draft, I am sure you'll fix them. I will still be happy to let you know where they were. Anyhow, best wishes in your book. I'll be the first to buy it.