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  Zephyr : Poeticspirit

Cinquain Train

Zephyr said Sep 17, 2007, 1:18 PM:

 

Cinquain (Aim for a L1 - L5 link)
L1 2 syllables
L2 4 syllables
L3 6 syllables
L4 8 syllables
l5 2 syllables

Use the last two syllables of the previous poem to start the next cinquain

Ice Queen
is it snowing
crystal daggers inside?
Warm to love and feel life’s sorrows
dissolve.

 

Re: Cinquain Train

Jami [no longer around] said Sep 23, 2007, 12:18 PM:

 

Dissolve.
Let go of thought.
What are you afraid of?
Share yourself freely without dread.
Seek life.

  Bridjet : Collaboration Moderatrix

Re: Cinquain Train

Bridjet said Sep 26, 2007, 8:52 AM:

 

Seek Life,
It sought you first.
Take the greatest gamble -
expose your heart to all you meet.
Just be.

  Amber : Smilemaker

Re: Cinquain Train

Amber said Oct 1, 2007, 12:13 AM:

 

Just be.
Drop the burden
At the sacred doorstep.
Enter into the comforting
Silence.

   Meenakshi : ~

Re: Cinquain Train

Meenakshi said Oct 4, 2007, 11:39 PM:

 

Silence
Of the wild night
Owls hooting, bats swishing
Invisible helpers astrally projecting
Healing

  HeyOK : Bridgebuilder

Re: Cinquain Train

HeyOK said Oct 29, 2007, 10:30 AM:

 

Healing
Could it be true
Something monumental
I ask might it happen too me
Waiting

 

Re: Cinquain Train

Nalukataq [no longer around] said Oct 29, 2007, 7:32 PM:

 

Waiting
for the river
in your bloodstream to flood
these galestruck levees of waning
patience

  HeyOK : Bridgebuilder

Re: Cinquain Train

HeyOK said Oct 31, 2007, 2:07 PM:

 

patience,
all that is shines
perfect and is just right
becoming ok with being
here now

   Meenakshi : ~

Re: Cinquain Train

Meenakshi said Oct 29, 2007, 7:50 PM:

 

Today
The dark clouds
Gathered from many lands
They  bring raindrops that will rain down
'morrow

  HeyOK : Bridgebuilder

Re: Cinquain Train

HeyOK said Oct 31, 2007, 2:09 PM:

 

'morrow
we will protect
those who gather around
unsure of what is happening
Fear not

  Zephyr : Poeticspirit

Re: Cinquain Train

Zephyr said Nov 5, 2007, 3:35 PM:

 

Fear not
for God is love
and tends all his lost sheep
love is our route home, his gift our
free will.

 

Re: Cinquain Train

Jami [no longer around] said Nov 14, 2007, 11:42 PM:

 

Free will
to choose your life.
Creation in your hands.
Acorns grow into giant oaks!
Live well.

  Zephyr : Poeticspirit

Re: Cinquain Train

Zephyr said Nov 18, 2007, 4:36 PM:

 

Live well
fear not, love all
creatures, humanity,
with true compassion emulate
Gods love

   Meenakshi : ~

Re: Cinquain Train

Meenakshi said Nov 18, 2007, 6:33 PM:

 

Gods love
Gently shines on all
The light within responds
Illumining all in  embrace
Ah! Grace

  jeepdog : Warrior Poet

Re: Cinquain Train

jeepdog said Nov 25, 2007, 6:59 PM:

 

Ah, Grace!
Washes over,
my imperfect body,
also cleansing my hidden soul.
Redeem.

  Joy Bringer : Visionary Creator & Artivist

Re: Cinquain Train

Joy Bringer said Nov 30, 2007, 9:43 PM:

 

Redeem
Inevitable
Urge to be in control
Consider the toll on your soul
Let go

  Zephyr : Poeticspirit

Re: Cinquain Train

Zephyr said Dec 1, 2007, 2:34 PM:

 

Let go
of negatives
anger and resentment
replace with positive and fill
with love.

  Joy Bringer : Visionary Creator & Artivist

Re: Cinquain Train

Joy Bringer said Dec 1, 2007, 6:05 PM:

 

With love
Return again
To know yourself and see
Everything is possible
Just Be

   Meenakshi : ~

Re: Cinquain Train

Meenakshi said Dec 1, 2007, 6:59 PM:

 

Just be
True to yourself
And like a clear mirror
Reflect what shines on you back to
Itself

  jeepdog : Warrior Poet

Re: Cinquain Train

jeepdog said Dec 1, 2007, 9:59 PM:

 

Itself.
Antithesis,
healthy view external,
We manifest transperonal.
Ourself.

  Joy Bringer : Visionary Creator & Artivist

Re: Cinquain Train

Joy Bringer said Dec 2, 2007, 10:38 AM:

 

Our self
Togetherness
In interconnection
Mutuality in action
Like Us

  Zephyr : Poeticspirit

Re: Cinquain Train

Zephyr said Dec 2, 2007, 1:02 PM:

 

Like us
all creatures ask
to simply be allowed
expression ,a life being true
to self.

  Megan : weaver-of-peace

Re: Cinquain Train

Megan said Dec 27, 2007, 12:52 AM:

 

To self
Like thunderous
Buffalo: to others
Like quiet water and the sound
Silence. 

   Meenakshi : ~

Re: Cinquain Train

Meenakshi said Dec 27, 2007, 6:26 AM:

 

Silence
Train in valley
Snaking through wooded trails
Smoke billows into lazy clouds
Peaceful

  Joy Bringer : Visionary Creator & Artivist

Re: Cinquain Train

Joy Bringer said Dec 27, 2007, 3:06 PM:

 

Peaceful
in dark moments
Even amid the bombs
Find equanimity within
Loving

  jeepdog : Warrior Poet

Re: Cinquain Train

jeepdog said Dec 27, 2007, 7:40 PM:

 

Loving
Today they took away,
A true leader from us,
Beautiful soul that I admired,
MOURNFUL

  Joy Bringer : Visionary Creator & Artivist

Re: Cinquain Train

Joy Bringer said Dec 28, 2007, 6:40 AM:

 

Mournful
Mission cut short
Soul giving wake up call
Spirit lives to see peace again
HOPEFUL

  Zephyr : Poeticspirit

Re: Cinquain Train

Zephyr said Dec 29, 2007, 5:58 PM:

 

hopeful -
more positive
love well,  yourself and all
no room left for fear when love fills
cosmos

   Meenakshi : ~

Re: Cinquain Train

Meenakshi said Dec 29, 2007, 8:45 PM:

 

cosmos
new year daily
each planet its own time
ever-changing, moving and still
timeless

  Megan : weaver-of-peace

Re: Cinquain Train

Megan said Jan 17, 2008, 8:31 AM:

 

Timeless
A jewel or
Precious thought of life or
What we are essentially and
Create. 

  Erick : Contemplative Dao Follower

Re: Cinquain Train

Erick said Feb 17, 2008, 3:57 AM:

 

Create
Your own world
By doing your own things
And just be yourself and
Enjoy

   Meenakshi : ~

Re: Cinquain Train

Meenakshi said Feb 17, 2008, 6:10 AM:

 

“Enjoy”
Erick, thanks so much
Really  like your advice
I've followed this precept for awhile
Daily

  Erick : Contemplative Dao Follower

Re: Cinquain Train

Erick said Feb 17, 2008, 6:46 AM:

 


Daily

News is old tomorrow

But news never stops

New news will be there again

Tomorrow

  Zephyr : Poeticspirit

Re: Cinquain Train

Zephyr said Feb 19, 2008, 10:57 AM:

 

Morning
dawns ruddy glow
adorns earths curving cheek
Man's newsworthy stories about
to break.

  Erick : Contemplative Dao Follower

Re: Cinquain Train

Erick said Feb 19, 2008, 12:09 PM:

 

To break

the day in two
is what you should do

with a good feeling everyday

and stay.

  masterymistery : Member of ETI

Re: Cinquain Train

masterymistery said Feb 23, 2008, 12:42 PM:

 

and stay
to play, today
or stay away and pray
on bended knees to humbly say
“your way”.

  Erick : Contemplative Dao Follower

Re: Cinquain Train

Erick said Feb 27, 2008, 1:20 PM:

 

“your way”
is a special way
it might not be my way
but it is good to experience it
every day

  Zephyr : Poeticspirit

Re: Cinquain Train

Zephyr said Mar 12, 2008, 5:12 PM:

 

Each day
when fully lived
at work or play expressed
fills the cup right now each treasured
moment

  Bridjet : Collaboration Moderatrix

Re: Cinquain Train

Bridjet said Mar 17, 2008, 2:05 PM:

 

Moment
the path of time

stop to smell the garden
keep the feeling with you now and
always

  Erick : Contemplative Dao Follower

Re: Cinquain Train

Erick said Mar 22, 2008, 6:29 AM:

 

Always
keep in mind
that the more you give,
you will be rich for
always

  Zephyr : Poeticspirit

Re: Cinquain Train

Zephyr said Mar 22, 2008, 7:07 AM:

 

Always
communicate
always collaberate,
jaw, jaw, jaw, is preferable
to war.

  Bridjet : Collaboration Moderatrix

Re: Cinquain Train

Bridjet said Mar 27, 2008, 3:51 PM:

 

To war

is to invite
death, hatred, egoism
Be on the side of peace and truth
Be well

  Zephyr : Poeticspirit

Re: Cinquain Train

Zephyr said Jul 27, 2008, 7:24 AM:

 

be well
find inner peace
love dissolves heartbreak
cementing our connections, be 
tranquil.

  Jordan : Lataifable

Re: Cinquain Train

Jordan said Aug 8, 2008, 11:07 PM:

 

tranquil
inner findings
can be found here now too,
while resting the mind on the breath
flowing.

  Zephyr : Poeticspirit

Re: Cinquain Train

Zephyr said Aug 9, 2008, 9:12 AM:

 

Flowing
in unity
in synchronicity
loving living being at One
with all

  Jordan : Lataifable

Re: Cinquain Train

Jordan said Aug 11, 2008, 9:45 AM:

 

With all
focused seeing
comes a inner knowing
of something greater than the Self
centered.

  Zephyr : Poeticspirit

Re: Cinquain Train

Zephyr said Aug 11, 2008, 3:49 PM:

 

Centered
feeling grounded
loving earth and all that
is the light of the divine One
revealed

  Jordan : Lataifable

Re: Cinquain Train

Jordan said Aug 12, 2008, 9:11 AM:

 

Revealed
effulgently
from the creation womb
is the light that feeds us all now
in birth

  Megan : weaver-of-peace

Re: Cinquain Train

Megan said Aug 17, 2008, 1:02 PM:

 

In birth,
From the darkness
Our mind wet and waking
Our life open and fighting; awake
Torn life

  Zephyr : Poeticspirit

Re: Cinquain Train

Zephyr said Aug 23, 2008, 4:48 PM:

 

Torn life
separated.
A patch waits - love will sew
life to quilt a divine cosmic
design

  Jordan : Lataifable

Re: Cinquain Train

Jordan said Aug 23, 2008, 10:23 PM:

 

design
wise enchantment
wells from behind the veil
of tilling the soil with the truth
present

  alexander rhubarb : nit picker

Re: Cinquain Train

alexander rhubarb said Aug 24, 2008, 6:36 AM:

 

present
momentary
ephemeral existence
bubbling up to the reification
perfect

  Zephyr : Poeticspirit

Re: Cinquain Train

Zephyr said Aug 24, 2008, 8:07 AM:

 


Perfect
a universe
within, at our centre.

Whole within the whole and focused

unite

  Jordan : Lataifable

Re: Cinquain Train

Jordan said Aug 24, 2008, 9:13 AM:

 

Unite
In harmony.
Honey bees seek nector
in flowers and warm summer days
a buzz

  Jordan : Lataifable

Re: Cinquain Train

Jordan said Aug 25, 2008, 9:26 AM:

 

a buzz,
lamenting now
a foregone deflation.
ignorance lights the way to feel
a burn

  alexander rhubarb : nit picker

Re: Cinquain Train

alexander rhubarb said Aug 26, 2008, 3:44 AM:

 

Burn
inflamed all knowing
spreading-searing all fronts
scorching my enemies with light
in peace

  Zephyr : Poeticspirit

Re: Cinquain Train

Zephyr said Aug 26, 2008, 3:15 PM:

 

In peace
you are a piece
holographically
conjoined, seamlessly connected
as One

  Jordan : Lataifable

Re: Cinquain Train

Jordan said Aug 26, 2008, 5:20 PM:

 

as One
created way
the moments are bequeathed
through our birth-right to spread essence
by words.

  alexander rhubarb : nit picker

Re: Cinquain Train

alexander rhubarb said Aug 26, 2008, 6:04 PM:

 

By word
by wing and fire
torn in two by our birth
mended by our mythology
seamless

  Zephyr : Poeticspirit

Re: Cinquain Train

Zephyr said Aug 27, 2008, 12:43 AM:

 

Seamless
friendship signposts
on each souls road to peace
our hearts eased as we take each step
unite.

  Jordan : Lataifable

Re: Cinquain Train

Jordan said Aug 27, 2008, 7:59 AM:

 

Unite
glory, rejoice
surrender the ego
to gravity - the common bond
One seat.

  alexander rhubarb : nit picker

Re: Cinquain Train

alexander rhubarb said Aug 27, 2008, 11:55 AM:

 

One seat
the curtain opens wide
it's the finale at long last
It's me

  Zephyr : Poeticspirit

Re: Cinquain Train

Zephyr said Aug 27, 2008, 4:15 PM:

 

It's me
watch me flower
petals open to light

unique contribution to God's
garden

  Jordan : Lataifable

Re: Cinquain Train

Jordan said Aug 27, 2008, 6:10 PM:

 

garden

sprouting a seed
for the roots to go deep

the fruit is offered to the sky

heaven

  alexander rhubarb : nit picker

Re: Cinquain Train

alexander rhubarb said Aug 30, 2008, 6:39 AM:

 

Heaven
above all else
soft warmth aglow with light
radiance emits cold fusion
energy

  Jordan : Lataifable

Re: Cinquain Train

Jordan said Aug 31, 2008, 4:45 PM:

 

ergy;
no carbon guilt
for the voice calling home
when the need is great for comfort
in faith

  Zephyr : Poeticspirit

Re: Cinquain Train

Zephyr said Aug 31, 2008, 5:30 PM:

 

In faith
we learn to trust
love holds trust on silk thread
not tied but extending freedoms

treasures.

  alexander rhubarb : nit picker

Re: Cinquain Train

alexander rhubarb said Sep 1, 2008, 4:48 AM:

 

Treasures
like a crystal
or wings made of bees wax
colourful cellophane plastics
lenses

  Jordan : Lataifable

Re: Cinquain Train

Jordan said Sep 1, 2008, 9:25 AM:

 

lenses
to clarity
with devotional arms
I embrace the path to freedom
power

  Susan : Guide on the side

Re: Cinquain Train

Susan said Sep 2, 2008, 10:27 AM:

 

power

personal power
whispers quiet melodies
while the choir sings the praises
of position power

  Zephyr : Poeticspirit

Re: Cinquain Train

Zephyr said Sep 2, 2008, 12:44 PM:

 

Powered
by the rhythm
of the universal
our hearts take a unique journey

called life

  alexander rhubarb : nit picker

Re: Cinquain Train

alexander rhubarb said Sep 2, 2008, 3:08 PM:

 

azure life
 lots of fiery days
many orange moon nights
time moves in golden waves of light
a buzz

  Jordan : Lataifable

Re: Cinquain Train

Jordan said Sep 2, 2008, 6:40 PM:

 

a buzz

bees repeating

a repleting word-train

a early tapping in the mind

reborn

  Megan : weaver-of-peace

Re: Cinquain Train

Megan said Sep 4, 2008, 6:24 AM:

 

Reborn
Coffee days and
Fear that one will pick you
apart with dead accuracy
Close me

  alexander rhubarb : nit picker

Re: Cinquain Train

alexander rhubarb said Sep 4, 2008, 2:43 PM:

 

Close me
to reappear
even more transparent
open my wounds and let me bleed
healing

  Zephyr : Poeticspirit

Re: Cinquain Train

Zephyr said Sep 5, 2008, 1:30 PM:

 

Healing
separation -
compassion and love bridge
the wide chasms where fear takes  grip
take heart  

  Jordan : Lataifable

Re: Cinquain Train

Jordan said Sep 6, 2008, 8:16 AM:

 

take heart
take hede for the
weak becomes the strong now
from the chasms razor sharp edge
free will

  alexander rhubarb : nit picker

Re: Cinquain Train

alexander rhubarb said Sep 6, 2008, 11:52 AM:

 

Free will
choices bought
intentionality
unfolding wings for the moment
ballance

  Mikey_Dee : A hoot and The frumious Bandersnatc

Re: Cinquain Train

Mikey_Dee said Sep 6, 2008, 4:33 PM:

 

Balance,
A way to go
I'll never lose again,
I know that from now on and on,
I'll win

  Zephyr : Poeticspirit

Re: Cinquain Train

Zephyr said Sep 7, 2008, 8:34 AM:

 

I'll win
if I stay true
to my higher spirit
loves path to unity is found
within.

  HeyOK : Bridgebuilder

Re: Cinquain Train

HeyOK said Sep 7, 2008, 9:27 AM:

 

Within
A need to share
Everywhere kindred souls
So much has been said and shared here
Thankful

  Jordan : Lataifable

Re: Cinquain Train

Jordan said Sep 7, 2008, 11:17 AM:

 

Thankful
humility
in the comfort of peace
a blessing flows down like water
in stream
 

   Meenakshi : ~

Re: Cinquain Train

Meenakshi said Sep 7, 2008, 7:27 PM:

 

Cinquain (Aim for a L1 - L5 link)
L1 2 syllables
L2 4 syllables
L3 6 syllables
L4 8 syllables
l5 2 syllables


In stream
Flowing strongly
Fish avoid the rapids
But in rocky shallows, calm ponds
Fish swim

  alexander rhubarb : nit picker

Re: Cinquain Train

alexander rhubarb said Sep 8, 2008, 4:22 AM:

 

Fish swim
birds fly in sky
wings adorn the butterfly
and we must walk with our heads held high
grounded

  Jordan : Lataifable

Re: Cinquain Train

Jordan said Sep 8, 2008, 9:02 PM:

 

Grounded
with legs planted
a crown reaches skyward
while becoming the middle way
refuge

   Meenakshi : ~

Re: Cinquain Train

Meenakshi said Sep 9, 2008, 12:11 PM:

 


l5 2 syllables

Refuge
In  times of hardship
Transforms as our needs change
For meditation and healing
Haven

  Zephyr : Poeticspirit

Re: Cinquain Train

Zephyr said Sep 9, 2008, 4:32 PM:

 

Haven
let us be One
each  for one another
accepting, sharing and loving
in peace

  alexander rhubarb : nit picker

Re: Cinquain Train

alexander rhubarb said Sep 9, 2008, 5:12 PM:

 

In peace
muddy trenches
dry and close-up the wounds
calloused grounds open to the seasons
give breath

  Zephyr : Poeticspirit

Re: Cinquain Train

Zephyr said Sep 10, 2008, 5:07 PM:

 

give breath
for it is life
we take it for granted
until we struggle and gasp breathe
our last

  alexander rhubarb : nit picker

Re: Cinquain Train

alexander rhubarb said Sep 11, 2008, 5:01 PM:

 

Our last
the beginning
the pause of contentness
between and betwixt universes
okay

  Zephyr : Poeticspirit

Re: Cinquain Train

Zephyr said Sep 13, 2008, 3:47 PM:

 

Okay
an endorsement
inner outer beauty'
reflecting the universal
wholeness.

  Lene : Ichinen

Re: Cinquain Train

Lene said Sep 15, 2008, 6:12 AM:

 

wholeness
human being
not a human doing
I´m good enough as I just am
loving

  alexander rhubarb : nit picker

Re: Cinquain Train

alexander rhubarb said Sep 16, 2008, 4:23 AM:

 

Loving
in my image
of my name creation
together you and I exist
as one

  Zephyr : Poeticspirit

Re: Cinquain Train

Zephyr said Sep 16, 2008, 11:34 AM:

 

As one
I watch birds rise
startled by a low jet.
In the ocean fish turn and wheel
one shoal

  Zephyr : Poeticspirit

Re: Cinquain Train

Zephyr said Sep 18, 2008, 4:47 PM:

 

One shoal
gives protection
confusion is their ploy
in oneness perfect unity
connects.

  alexander rhubarb : nit picker

Re: Cinquain Train

alexander rhubarb said Sep 19, 2008, 3:54 AM:

 

Connects
to images
stuck in my body and soul
that bathe and nourish my inner
child

  Zephyr : Poeticspirit

Re: Cinquain Train

Zephyr said Sep 19, 2008, 6:15 AM:

 

Children,
seed of adult.
Now grown we each carry
the baby, child and teenager
for life.

  Lene : Ichinen

Re: Cinquain Train

Lene said Sep 19, 2008, 6:26 AM:

 

For life
every being
celebrating dancing
bubbling with devotion potion
pure joy

  alexander rhubarb : nit picker

Re: Cinquain Train

alexander rhubarb said Sep 19, 2008, 2:38 PM:

 

Pure joy-
the elixir
the seed that comes and goes
that grows in spite of season's  reign
lives on

  Zephyr : Poeticspirit

Re: Cinquain Train

Zephyr said Sep 29, 2008, 7:53 AM:

 

Live on
our planet earth
lightly, sustainably,

and future generations will
thank you

  alexander rhubarb : nit picker

Re: Cinquain Train

alexander rhubarb said Sep 29, 2008, 3:34 PM:

 

Thank you
for the morning
and for the sunny afternoon
thanks for the nighttime and thanks for 
the moon

  Zephyr : Poeticspirit

Re: Cinquain Train

Zephyr said Oct 5, 2008, 6:16 AM:

 

The moon
turns the same face
to earth each night never
rotates to show us his shadowed
dark side 

  Jordan : Lataifable

Re: Cinquain Train

Jordan said Oct 6, 2008, 9:45 AM:

 

dark side
the other side
of the same flipped surface
contrasting luminosity
with void

  Zephyr : Poeticspirit

Re: Cinquain Train

Zephyr said Oct 7, 2008, 2:22 PM:

 

with void
nonexistence
opens space to invent
what dreams will open thought and fill
future.

  alexander rhubarb : nit picker

Re: Cinquain Train

alexander rhubarb said Oct 8, 2008, 6:21 AM:

 

Future
not here and now
nor what has passed us by
but that which may never come to be
the past

  Lene : Ichinen

Re: Cinquain Train

Lene said Oct 9, 2008, 5:07 AM:

 

The past
is relevant;
a box of knowledge tools.
The future happens hopefully;
Now? Here!

  HeyOK : Bridgebuilder

Re: Cinquain Train

HeyOK said Oct 9, 2008, 10:07 AM:

 

Now? Here.
I stand alone
Yet also with others
Our toolbox is full and ready
Onward

  alexander rhubarb : nit picker

Re: Cinquain Train

alexander rhubarb said Oct 9, 2008, 10:39 AM:

 

Onward
here now or not
for how long who would know
who are we anyways who knows
any day

  Zephyr : Poeticspirit

Re: Cinquain Train

Zephyr said Oct 9, 2008, 11:01 AM:

 

Some day
any day soon
the world we work towards
will materialise in love
in peace

  Lene : Ichinen

Re: Cinquain Train

Lene said Oct 9, 2008, 1:59 PM:

 

In peace
joyful measure
every now a treasure
as we do learn to breathe with ease
leisure

  alexander rhubarb : nit picker

Re: Cinquain Train

alexander rhubarb said Oct 9, 2008, 5:25 PM:

 

Leisure
never enough
cannot be bought or sold
but is a goal to be achieved
with rest

  Jordan : Lataifable

Re: Cinquain Train

Jordan said Oct 10, 2008, 6:03 PM:

 

With rest
the unfolding
brings the gleaming treasures
of eternal presence as one
human

  Zephyr : Poeticspirit

Re: Cinquain Train

Zephyr said Oct 12, 2008, 4:39 PM:

 

Human
imperfection
striving for perfection
yet we discover we are loved
always.

  Jordan : Lataifable

Re: Cinquain Train

Jordan said Oct 13, 2008, 2:48 PM:

 

Always
wondering how
the unfolding presence
stirs the soul to a greater depth;
selfless

  alexander rhubarb : nit picker

Re: Cinquain Train

alexander rhubarb said Oct 14, 2008, 5:23 PM:

 

Selfless
free desire
unspoken languages
related to the rippling
river

  Erick : Contemplative Dao Follower

Re: Cinquain Train

Erick said Oct 16, 2008, 1:06 PM:

 

River:where do you go to?
When I throw a stone in you,
I change your stream
and yet it cannot be seen
by anyone

  Mikey_Dee : A hoot and The frumious Bandersnatc

Re: Cinquain Train

Mikey_Dee said Oct 16, 2008, 3:47 PM:

 

Someone
should learn to count,
and keep the train running
smoothly

  Zephyr : Poeticspirit

Re: Cinquain Train

Zephyr said Oct 16, 2008, 4:02 PM:

 

Smoothly
we count the beats
syllable pattern makes
 a cinquain that arises from
spirit.

  alexander rhubarb : nit picker

Re: Cinquain Train

alexander rhubarb said Oct 17, 2008, 6:51 PM:

 

Spirit
keeps me alive
forever forgiving
humbles me to my very knees
always

  Zephyr : Poeticspirit

Re: Cinquain Train

Zephyr said Oct 21, 2008, 6:32 AM:

 

Always
there, generous
gifts bestowed on each head
the universe favours no one
loves All

  Lene : Ichinen

Re: Cinquain Train

Lene said Oct 27, 2008, 1:19 PM:

 

Loves All
One Light Embrace
Home is where death takes us
Never need to fear to go there
New Birth

  Zephyr : Poeticspirit

Re: Cinquain Train

Zephyr said Oct 28, 2008, 1:26 PM:

 

new birth
a miracle
first gasp grasps a tight hold
and all her precious tomorrows
commence

  Lene : Ichinen

Re: Cinquain Train

Lene said Nov 1, 2008, 1:20 PM:

 

Commence!
This life is yours
innocent and trusting
Bless your journey, may you find peace
shameless

  Jordan : Lataifable

Re: Cinquain Train

Jordan said Nov 2, 2008, 10:08 AM:

 

Shameless,
no judgement here
only the present time
object relationship being
with space….

  alexander rhubarb : nit picker

Re: Cinquain Train

alexander rhubarb said Nov 3, 2008, 3:36 AM:

 

With space
enveloping
surrounding my every fibre
blanketing and connecting me
with you

  Zephyr : Poeticspirit

Re: Cinquain Train

Zephyr said Nov 3, 2008, 4:16 AM:

 

With you
another me 
we  connect and touch base
as brother sister commingle
in trust

  Jordan : Lataifable

Re: Cinquain Train

Jordan said Nov 3, 2008, 9:07 AM:

 

In trust
faith is reborn
to renew a union
with Self, with Spirit, and others
we love

  Lene : Ichinen

Re: Cinquain Train

Lene said Nov 3, 2008, 10:56 AM:

 

We love
limitlessly
knowing we are whole-y,
part of all, is one, is love, now;
funny!

  Zephyr : Poeticspirit

Re: Cinquain Train

Zephyr said Nov 4, 2008, 6:07 PM:

 

Funny
how life changes
when love guides our life
heart to loving heart brings peace to
our days

  Lene : Ichinen

Re: Cinquain Train

Lene said Nov 5, 2008, 8:18 AM:

 

Our days
beautious bounty
richness of e-motion
intensely alive and kicking
Joyrush!

  Zephyr : Poeticspirit

Re: Cinquain Train

Zephyr said Nov 11, 2008, 2:26 PM:

 

Joy rush
when a heart fills
with divine love the flow
spills over and is shared with all
in peace.

  Samme : Prince of Rainbows<3

Re: Cinquain Train

Samme said Nov 11, 2008, 2:32 PM:

 

in peace
i beckon you
to come with me now
in my pure imaginations
with love

  Zephyr : Poeticspirit

Re: Cinquain Train

Zephyr said Nov 14, 2008, 4:39 PM:

 

With love
for all that is
overflowing your heart
you will find that love paves the road
with peace.

  Samme : Prince of Rainbows<3

Re: Cinquain Train

Samme said Nov 14, 2008, 7:29 PM:

 

with peace
come now and smile
to everyone you meet
standing side by side hand to hand
as one.

  Zephyr : Poeticspirit

Re: Cinquain Train

Zephyr said Nov 15, 2008, 7:05 AM:

 

As One
we have all we need
more than we can dream up
infinite  love and  abundance
always

  Lene : Ichinen

Re: Cinquain Train

Lene said Nov 17, 2008, 1:22 AM:

 

Always
come together
celebrate the wonder
dancing, laughing, overflowing
growing

  Jordan : Lataifable

Re: Cinquain Train

Jordan said Nov 19, 2008, 6:27 AM:

 

Growing,
maturation,
a proclamation now
to becoming fully human
with Zen

  Lene : Ichinen

Re: Cinquain Train

Lene said Nov 19, 2008, 12:37 PM:

 

with Zen
now here; aware
sound of one hand clapping
stills the stirrings of my minding
mirror

  Jordan : Lataifable

Re: Cinquain Train

Jordan said Nov 20, 2008, 9:49 AM:

 

Mirror,
the reflection,
seeing another in self-
revelatory True nature
brilliance

  Zephyr : Poeticspirit

Re: Cinquain Train

Zephyr said Nov 21, 2008, 2:12 AM:

 

Brilliance
is seen when viewed
with pure love, no shadow
is seen when higher spirit's truth
prevails.

   Meenakshi : ~

Re: Cinquain Train

Meenakshi said Nov 22, 2008, 7:20 PM:

 

Prevails,
Persists, endures,
They say that in the end
Truth always wins over untruth
It's true!

  Jordan : Lataifable

Re: Cinquain Train

Jordan said Nov 23, 2008, 12:02 PM:

 

It's true!
Our soul window
has an intelligence. 
The gracious luminosity 
shines through

  Lene : Ichinen

Re: Cinquain Train

Lene said Nov 24, 2008, 7:38 AM:

 

Shines through
intuition
recognizing the truth
ecchoing within our heartbeat;
wisdome

  Jordan : Lataifable

Re: Cinquain Train

Jordan said Nov 26, 2008, 9:51 AM:

 

wise dome
cranial vault
knowledgable insight
comes from the infinite space
of light 

  Lene : Ichinen

Re: Cinquain Train

Lene said Nov 26, 2008, 12:30 PM:

 

of light
inside and out
through and around our all
jumping sparks between the atoms
ALIVE!

  Zephyr : Poeticspirit

Re: Cinquain Train

Zephyr said Nov 27, 2008, 10:12 AM:

 

Alive
to our planet
to the heavens above
to all fellow creatures man's born
to love.

  Jordan : Lataifable

Re: Cinquain Train

Jordan said Nov 27, 2008, 10:53 AM:

 

To love…
To life fullfilled…
A salute to blessings
eminating from the essence
merging

  Lene : Ichinen

Re: Cinquain Train

Lene said Dec 1, 2008, 1:49 AM:

 

Merging
melting fusion
elements of one soup       
here´s to freedom from illusion;
salute!

  Zephyr : Poeticspirit

Re: Cinquain Train

Zephyr said Dec 2, 2008, 12:25 AM:

 

Salute
this world anew
poised for a brand new dawn
a world where peace and love propel
progress

  Lene : Ichinen

Re: Cinquain Train

Lene said Dec 6, 2008, 1:55 PM:

 

Progress
on- and forward
increasing love potential
peace and joyfully surrounded
all ways

  Jordan : Lataifable

Re: Cinquain Train

Jordan said Dec 6, 2008, 3:15 PM:

 

All ways
forever more
into the creation
within Absolute constant love
conscious

  Zephyr : Poeticspirit

Re: Cinquain Train

Zephyr said Dec 7, 2008, 11:13 AM:

 

Conscious
of the blessings
that rain on us daily
when loving thoughts create ever
more love

  Lene : Ichinen

Re: Cinquain Train

Lene said Dec 8, 2008, 1:53 AM:

 

more love
more and more and
so it welleth over
washing through our inner waters
warming

  Lene : Ichinen

Re: Cinquain Train

Lene said Dec 13, 2008, 1:38 PM:

 

warming
likemindedness
seeing understanding
helps to see what really matters
between

  Zephyr : Poeticspirit

Re: Cinquain Train

Zephyr said Dec 13, 2008, 1:57 PM:

 

Between
us closeness
strengthens by loving One
show compassion inclusively
Oneself

  Lene : Ichinen

Re: Cinquain Train

Lene said Dec 31, 2008, 5:18 AM:

 

OneSelf
Here Now All Is
One soup of Energy
swirling round and round for ever
Being

  Zephyr : Poeticspirit

Re: Cinquain Train

Zephyr said Jan 1, 2009, 3:52 PM:

 

Being
this way or that’
adopting a new hat ,
only one way to be - true to
Oneself

  Jordan : Lataifable

Re: Cinquain Train

Jordan said Jan 18, 2009, 11:45 PM:

 

Oneself
tilling the soil
congruently apart
in separation together
a bloom

  Zephyr : Poeticspirit

Re: Cinquain Train

Zephyr said Jan 19, 2009, 11:36 AM:

 

a bloom
arose, perfumed.
growing towards the light
and nestled in its central heart
golden