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Re: Seasonal haiku, please add your own Aha moments

http://addresstofollow.gaia.com — Fri, 15 May 2009 15:44:56 GMT

Spiders young
like beads on a web
vaccillate

Re: Seasonal haiku, please add your own Aha moments

http://Meenakshi.gaia.com — Mon, 11 May 2009 01:08:43 GMT

takes last dive
newt swallows gulps down
settles down

Re: Seasonal haiku, please add your own Aha moments

http://addresstofollow.gaia.com — Fri, 08 May 2009 23:02:43 GMT

Damselfly
held fast in newts jaws
takes last dive.

Seasonal haiku, please add your own Aha moments

http://addresstofollow.gaia.com — Fri, 17 Oct 2008 01:06:37 GMT

Siona has posted an interesting and informative thread on haiku, if you need some guidance
http://groups.gaia.com/poetry__workshop/conversations/view/434242#435111

More guidelines for haiku

http://www.ahapoetry.com/haiku.htm

Some of my haiku inspired by this winter, please add some of yours

Winter Ku

cautiously
the cat walks on water -
ice on pond

thick snow
wild boar tracks to hole
in iced pond

winter sun
puss seeks it's warmth
from the porch.

pinhead rainbows
glisten on stardrops -
sun on snowmelt

snow storm
the doctor calls
in off-roader

snowy monday
doctor slithers down path
in high heels

candied grass
sunshine
licks it clean

winter gloom
two vibrant goldfinch
lift my mood

arctic night
puss in white boots
hunts prey

icy morning
the cat pirrhouettes
lands - legs splayed.