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Autumn Gold

Posted on Nov 9th, 2009 by

Zephyr in Poets Workshop. Light critique or Indepth critique, please state preference.

Autumn Gold ( for C&C please. ) Gold leaf is draped over gardens bed and soon the mud will turn them brown the garden tools stacked in the shed heavy dew lays soft as... More »

Re: running --c&c

Posted on Nov 8th, 2009 by

Zephyr in Poets Workshop. Light critique or Indepth critique, please state preference.

Sherab, I have had a couple of nights with very little sleep,Mum not well, hoping to get a better night tonight, so will come back to this when I am fresh tomorrow, initial read left... More »

Re: poen for Nessa 5 years old - Gabriel Fitzmaurice

Posted on Nov 8th, 2009 by

Zephyr in Discuss and share your ideas about a favourite poem.

Mikey, I like his style, and values, smiles

Re: poen for Nessa 5 years old - Gabriel Fitzmaurice

Posted on Nov 8th, 2009 by

Mikey_Dee in Discuss and share your ideas about a favourite poem.

Yes Amy, this guy is just amazing- will post more of his stuff, take care & be like Nessa! M

Re: poen for Nessa 5 years old - Gabriel Fitzmaurice

Posted on Nov 8th, 2009 by

Goddess2day in Discuss and share your ideas about a favourite poem.

Oh, this is just so gosh darn cute and sweet...sweeter than all the strawberries of the world. Nessa reminds me of my six year old niece.....what a joy....everyone needs to have someone like Nessa in... More »

poen for Nessa 5 years old - Gabriel Fitzmaurice

Posted on Nov 8th, 2009 by

Mikey_Dee in Discuss and share your ideas about a favourite poem.

She brings me a pale strawberry While I'm sitting on the loo, The last one in the garden, Says, " Dad, this is for you". I don't know what I'd do without her- There simply... More »

Re: Moist with Unending Mystery - C&C

Posted on Nov 6th, 2009 by

sherab in Poets Workshop. Light critique or Indepth critique, please state preference.

You know, I like this, but it doesn,t quite get all the way to Poetry for me. I can hear something in the malleability of clay and something else about the light. I f you... More »

running --c&c

Posted on Nov 6th, 2009 by

sherab in Poets Workshop. Light critique or Indepth critique, please state preference.

Across the wide grass running A thousand meters high The red cloud at sunset Burned in back of my mind Everything halting Like statues on a train The mumbling of passengers Who never said hello.... More »

Re: Moist with Unending Mystery - C&C

Posted on Oct 19th, 2009 by

Meenakshi in Poets Workshop. Light critique or Indepth critique, please state preference.

What do you think, Zephyr, about the knowledge and light? Does it work for you? I'll sit with it and move away from that very attractive mystery --lol!!!

Re: Moist with Unending Mystery - C&C

Posted on Oct 19th, 2009 by

Zephyr in Poets Workshop. Light critique or Indepth critique, please state preference.

Wow Meenakshi, a little gem,that gives clarity for me now, does it feel right to you?