Re: Something Different

Drew, I'm no poet, but as a reader, if I may:

First, I enjoyed it. It took me to a time perhaps of Sheba - long ago.

Then:

Not an angel,
nor a muse,
something different. 

Suggestions:
Not an angel,
not a muse,
something different. 

Or-
Not an angel nor a muse
Something different.
–
Question:
sitting in her den, pausing
breath as she runs an errant finger

Is this 'breath' the noun or breathe the verb? I couldn't quite get that.