manny fresh

carl, man that rhyme is whack, and im thinkin that you should take it back, because im bout to lay it down real nice and hard, and you gonna look like a big retard, so dont get mad because im nice, but i added just a little bit of sugar and spice, to make this rhyme real nice and sweet, and maybe someday ill use it on the street!!

Re: manny fresh

First off my goober friend, there is an important lesson i have to send.  You rhymed three times with the same rhyme and in the lyrical business, that's a crime.  You're just jealous that i'm so zealous with the fella's maken my beat box.  Sligh like a fox, i'll undermine you cuase i can rhyme too.  If your going to make this a rap battle, i'll have to herd you along with the rest of the cattle, back into your baby pen until you're ready to challenge me again!

UH!  Word! 3 mins!

Dats shiz is whack yo!
Masta Chinn

Re: manny fresh

look, man im not trying to be mean, but you should just give it up cause this aint your scene, but im here to teach you how to do this flow, so you dont look like a junky hobo. there are three main steps you have to take, and the first on is dont get in my way. the second is a little bit more sincere, but your never gonna be my peer. the third should be a refresher course, but im the rhyme master and i think you just lost!!!…

slam bam thank ya ma'am

Re: manny fresh

You can't even conclude correctly, best to try and try and make the rhyme dirrectly because just don't know how to do it complicated, and crap with that crap you'll never get compensated you'll just get negated along by the swing of the bling bling that be hang round my neck.  so now you're in check. Oh and by the way, it don't matter what you say, the only rules to a freestyle is to get rhyme to line up single file and pile to the ceiling.  know fess up to the master and be kneeling.

-Masta Chinn

Re: manny fresh

Now ya’ll just look out, this is MY night to bout. You should leave it to Nic @ night, cuz’ you know my rhyme will be outta’ sight. You two brothers take a step back.  Get to bed – don’t be talkin’ that smack.  The rhymes you two are babblin' don’t stand the chance of travelin'.  That’s all this girl’s got to say.  Of course if you all have it your way, you’ll be serving up your Big Whoppers, to the rest of the female teeny-boppers.

Ok, that was bad, but you can't blame the girl for tryin'.  :) 

Re: manny fresh

well lookie here its a rhymin fest, with me, cc and nicole to impress. but thats ok cuz its time to fly, like a rocket shooting strait up into the sky, so tighten up your shoes and brush your teeth because the beast is ready to be released….  carl, man dont pout and cry, your rhymes dont make sense to every guy, i dont know what the heck there about, but im not gonna fuss and scream and shout, you use big words and thats alright, and you think that your already out of sight, but dude not to be rude this is a feud that ive brewed, and your crude that you allude to me being tight, but honestly you cant even put up a fight, i can sit here and think of millions of things to say, but if i do youll probably sit up all night and day, tryin to think of something good that you can say, but just like the dude in the closet, your ***t is gay……

hiphopapotimus….

Re: manny fresh

Ok, time to confess that I'm ready to digress and wipe up this mess you call a rhyme scheme.  Really, it's a bunch of smoke and steam that you got pouring out of that chicken pecking finger, let's just hope it doesn't linger.  If you can't understand the diction then don't complain about the affliction cause i don't wanna hear the whining of you and your worthless rhyming.  If you can't think of the words for your chorus, get a thesaurus but please just don't bore us with that same old lickety split skit or imma get to smiting and with that kind of plighting you'll be fighting for your ability to write at all as you'll be curled up in a shellshocked ball.  You may be a hot filipino but i down guys like you like my nightly pino…Colada!  Go back to ya fatha wearing your prada and suck on your baba cause don't wanna see the nada you got spitting cause it's just not fitting to the ears of this lyricist.  Uh son, you just kissed this fist and hit the ground with a deafening pound.  My power has no bound cause my vocal stability is just that sound!

Peace yo!

(btw guys, manny and i are floor mates at our college, so it's nothing personal to each other)

Over and out,
Chinn's what it's about!

Re: manny fresh

so im sittin in my room thinking what the heck, is this rhyming crap that you have left. and it finally came to me in a dream, that you wanna be like me, or so it would seem. so im gonna show ya now really how it goes, because your writin stuff that sounds like those average joes. you wanna rhyme more than once up in a phrase, but it seems like you got yourself in a daze, with mist everywhere and smoke in your head, everytime i have to hear your stuff i dread, the time i waste tryin to read your junk, while your like the titanic ship, your sunk. and if you dont like the way i answer back, then you can send another rhyme trying to talk more smack, but again and again im hittin it hard, and your sittin in your room prayin to the lord, to try to give you a style so clean, but HEY im manny fresh and youll never beat me

Re: manny fresh

Manny fresh?  about as fragrant as the mesh on a fishing net.  Do i really get no respect for showing you the ropes and raising your hopes, or are you just gonna be another one of those rappa's who don't give the proper praise to they masta's?  Manny fresh, you got the lyrical ability of John Tesh.  He plays piano by the way so allow me to say that your speaking in the wrong lingo.  What ate'cha baby?  a Dingo? that's what your rhymes sound like old and undeserving of the mike.  Psych!  If it weren't for losers like you, what would i do when i need to eat in the morning?  That's a warning, back off manny and sit in your room on your fanny!

jam'n on it,
Masta Chinn

Re: manny fresh

wait one sec cause im starting to realize, that we are the only guys, in this rappin fued, with all these people here too, is it that they cant do, what masta chinn and manny fresh prove, is the new time to shine, because i think its a crime, that we are this dang good, and we dont live in the hood, but that alright cuz were too tight, but our rhymes are not polite, well smash and crunch yall haters hard, so yall better be puttin up your guard, cuz we just formed the alliance of men, and here is where all you haters lifes will end….

Alliance of Men,
Masta Chinn and Manny Fresh

Re: manny fresh

Me and my home slice manny, are gonna tell it off to your granny!  This G and his homie are gonna let out a spree that gone free ev-er-E lyric ever created.  In the center of it all we were enucleated to make a central gravity for the rest of yall to unleash your insanity but no…  All we get to show for it all is Nicole and Heather O'Neill given their short shpeil!  What about the rest you guys.  *sighs* as manny quoted “I ain't a killa, but just don't temp me.”  that's what he once gloated but now it's duely noted.  Lay down a rhyme or you'll be punished for your crime!!!

Smaked yall up the wall,
Home Slice Manny Fresh and MC Masta Chinn!