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The Greatest Story Ever ToldMonad said Sep 9, 2006, 1:15 PM: |
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Ok, are you ready? This is very simple. We are going to write a story thru this thread. You can write a word, a sentence, a paragraph, that's all up to you! You may want to participate as many times you want. Make sure what the person before you has posted and continue where she/he has left. When you are replying to this post, please make sure you hit the reply to this particular thread so story follows more smoothly! |
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Re: The Greatest Story Ever ToldDomus Ulixes said Sep 9, 2006, 3:24 PM: |
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Once upon A time, in a Country far, far away lived Super-Monad. He and his little super hero helper, Brian Boy, were to save the world from immenent danger. In this episode, Brian Boy… |
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Re: The Greatest Story Ever ToldMonad said Sep 9, 2006, 3:32 PM: |
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Re: The Greatest Story Ever ToldDomus Ulixes said Sep 10, 2006, 3:27 AM: |
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The Dutch couple next door, which were spreading their 'Zaad' Gave him a beautiful Idea. Never before a concept of such easy came out of such a little hole, and as his mouth opened, history was made. But, due to his pore knowledge of the dutch language, an extra 'Z' was added. Thus Zaadz was born, But as faith would have it, all of the sudden….. |
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Re: The Greatest Story Ever ToldMonad said Sep 10, 2006, 10:07 AM: |
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…. he realized it was getting too late. He needed some sleep. He went upstairs in his bedroom to wear his favorite pajamas which said “Kappa Kappa Gamma, OMG, I LOVE UCLA” on the back, which was given to him by one of his ex-girlfriends who attended UCLA. |
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Re: The Greatest Story Ever ToldRainbowBright said Sep 10, 2006, 12:28 PM: |
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And then BOOOOM!!!! A loud sound woke him from his precious slumber! He couldn't believe what he was seeing!! Right there in his bedroom was a…. |
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Re: The Greatest Story Ever ToldDomus Ulixes said Sep 10, 2006, 2:15 PM: |
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Rabbit with a big clock. Telling him to hurry! En so they went down the rabbit hole. 'What the *bleep*?!?!' Cried Brian Boy out! what is happening? where is my shirt? Where you want it to be! sad the rabbit. And so it was, and magicaly as if his mind was to paly with it, the magic letters Zaadz appeared on the shirt. Then, the end of the line, He fell out of the rebbit hole, straight into…. |
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Re: The Greatest Story Ever Toldmartha said Sep 10, 2006, 5:36 PM: |
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a parking lot in front of a Dunkin' Donuts in Pomona. It had begun to rain. The air was fragrant and chill. A cold wind ruffled his jammies, which were beginning to get wet. He staired down at the giant alarm clock, thinking how useless it was now. His bare feet splashed in the puddles as he headed toward the brightly lit donut shop. He entered to the throb of fresh coffee and the intoxication of warm, fresh donuts. But he didn't have a dime! Feeling rather foolish, he looked up at the smiling woman at the counter and said, |
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Re: The Greatest Story Ever ToldMsCapriKell said Sep 10, 2006, 7:58 PM: |
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“What am I to do next?” |
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Re: The Greatest Story Ever ToldDomus Ulixes said Sep 10, 2006, 11:06 PM: |
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his game of soccer. With the winds in his hair, and the fresh smell of donuts still inside his nostrels, he went outside, to play soccer with the kids outside. It seemed as his second nature, but the wind made it his first. The ball itself was as an extention of himself, and though the magic rabbit out of the box had disapeared into oblivience, the kids were joyfull, wondering which team he was, with that odd looking shirt he was wearing. Thus, a few hours passed, as the winds once again led him, all the way to…. |
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Re: The Greatest Story Ever ToldMonad said Sep 11, 2006, 6:11 PM: |
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who often wandered around message boards and spread love through electronic messages. |
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Re: The Greatest Story Ever Toldayla said Sep 12, 2006, 5:40 PM: |
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He thought he heard her soft voice calling, the answer to the question so close! But, alas, the wind began to blow again and it was not a soft breeze but a whoosh of very strong wind! He felt himself tumble and topple and then fall down altogether. Ouch! Good heavens, here he found himself in the high desert of Idaho and although the sage brush he had landed upon smelt quite heavenly it didn't make for a soft landing. He stood up, brushed himself off and began walking through the barren field of sage brush and lava rocks, having no idea what he was to do next! |
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Re: The Greatest Story Ever ToldMonad said Sep 12, 2006, 6:32 PM: |
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“I would love to” he said softly. He began to feel safer. “Maybe they will help me to find the Oracle”, he thought. |
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Re: The Greatest Story Ever Toldmartha said Sep 12, 2006, 10:23 PM: |
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which stretched out under the sun and sagebrush at the end of a one-lane private road, he followed the cowboy through a gate fashioned from wagon wheels. As he gazed at the wheels, a feeling of vertigo almost overwhelmed him, as if his spirit were being plucked from his body and drawn into the whirling spokes of the wheel…which couldn't possibly be turning…and yet… somehow he had lost track of time. As he regained the feeling of his feet supporting him solidly on the road, he realized the cowboy was saying, “…been part of that Indian medicine man blessing that makes this place real special. They say these parts are waitin' for a particular person who has a certain strong personal medicine, I don't know what for. Stories are just stories.” But as he heard the cowboy's words, a thought crystalized in his brain, so bright and clear, and he knew |
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Re: The Greatest Story Ever ToldGavin said Sep 13, 2006, 5:36 AM: |
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…he was the one, but what did that mean? What was the one to do? Suddenly a big gust of wind blow and a piece of paper slammed in his face. It was addressed to The ONE. It said go to Banger Maine to find the true Oracle. |
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Re: The Greatest Story Ever Toldayla said Sep 13, 2006, 9:31 AM: |
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He looked up to tell the cowboy that he was so sorry but that he needed to leave right away and blinked….huh? Snow? He shivered and then noticed a crowd gathering near a bookstore. He followed and found himself jostled and shoved through the door. It was warm and there was that heavenly smell of coffee again. |
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Re: The Greatest Story Ever ToldDomus Ulixes said Sep 13, 2006, 11:28 PM: |
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'Mr. Anderson, how nice of you to join us.' Mister King replied. 'Smith?' Brian asked. 'No' said Stephen, 'I am Richard Bachman, And I have recently deseaced'. ' But, If you are dead, how can you be here? How can you be alive, that is ridicilous. You cannot be dead, and alive at the same time!' Brian replied. 'And why are you calling me Mr. Anderson?' . ' Are you not the one?' Bachman replied? ' I am not Mr. Anderson if that is what you mean' Brian replied'. |
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Re: The Greatest Story Ever ToldGavin said Sep 14, 2006, 5:31 AM: |
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“What is that green rock over there?”
“No I feel fine” replied Brien. Mr. Bachman still laughing said “this rock is from a far away planet I'm sure you are familiar with, oh the weakness in your eyes, I see it intensafiy.” “I'm sorry Mr. Bachman but I feel stronger than ever, are you sure you are not thinking about somebody else?” Brian responded looking confused. …..long pause…. “Oh stupid, stupid me, the wrong one, it's the one in the blue tights not pj's.” Mr. Bachman said while hitting his head. After another long pause Mr. Bachman kindly said “I'm sorry my mind has been confused ever since that dreadful day when… |
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Re: The Greatest Story Ever Toldmartha said Sep 14, 2006, 10:39 PM: |
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I discovered I had developed cancer of the pseudonym, the disease from which I later passed away.” “Huh?” said Brian. “It’s a rare form of schizonomia,” explained Bachman. “Is it contageous?” asked Brian. “Yes,” answered Bachman. “I can tell you are developing it yourself. You’re not who you think you are.” In a rare burst of insight, Brian looked deeply into Bachman’s eyes and answered him, “I am the One, and I seek the Oracle. The truth of my situation is worth 1,000 years of your confusion. Either assist me or get out of my way.” “Your way is my way, and my way is your way!” laughed Bachman, drawing closer and closer to Brian. Just at that moment |
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Re: The Greatest Story Ever ToldLexi said Sep 17, 2006, 3:34 PM: |
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…the sky began to cloud over and Mr. Bachman became disoriented. |
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Re: The Greatest Story Ever Toldmu said Sep 19, 2006, 5:42 PM: |
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A Divine Golden Mist. |
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Re: The Greatest Story Ever Toldayla said Sep 19, 2006, 7:21 PM: |
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Our friend, who was at first enchanted by the Golden Mist, pulled his jacket over his head for protection after learning it's source. Even if it was God's dog ….well, you know. Mr. Bachman may have had the answer. It's very possible. Unfortunately, he had mysteriously disappeared and our friend found himself alone once again> He looked around in bewilderment… |
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Re: The Greatest Story Ever ToldMsCapriKell said Sep 19, 2006, 8:01 PM: |
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…. and in that moment he realized what the Oracle's call had reminded him to do… “Listen to the winds.” And he knew he had to stop looking around him to connect with the answers that would lead him to the Oracle. |
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Re: The Greatest Story Ever Toldmu said Sep 19, 2006, 8:19 PM: |
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His eyes covered with mist, and the thought of returning to the ocean, he blinked…. |
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Re: The Greatest Story Ever ToldHeyOK said Sep 20, 2006, 3:50 AM: |
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a rather old woman. Just how old was difficult to tell as her appearance kept changing. First wrinkled cheeks and brow with wise eyes and laugh lines, then baby soft skin with rosy cheeks and eyes full of innocence. This was happening wasn’t it? He remembered what he’d just seen except then her face was older, or younger yet again. |
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Re: The Greatest Story Ever ToldMonad said Sep 22, 2006, 10:48 PM: |
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“power in numbers” he thought. This was going to be a long journey. |
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Re: The Greatest Story Ever ToldDomus Ulixes said Sep 23, 2006, 4:46 PM: |
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Thus, his very first follower joined his side in the search of peace, love and wisdom. he remembered the ocean, and as it sounded at sunset at the west coast. But he had no Idea how to get there, he didn't even know where he was. let alone be an ocean. And he had to care for the crown aswell. Thus, he prayed, he prayed to a god, he didn't knew would exist. Or whether this single moment of faith in the world, he didn't fully understand, and where only the winds whispered wisdom in his ears. So instead of praying, he stoped. He looked down, down to the earth that was given to him. And over the beautiful flowers, stretching out as far as the eye could see. He looked closer, very close. And was shocked, by the sudden appearence of one of Bachman's old Friends, The ghost of Odyssius. 'Why have you called me from my home?' Odyssius asked. 'How can I call you from your home, when I do not even know where that is?' Brian replied. 'But can you be sure you didn't?' Odyssius replied. ' you see, there are no right or wrongs, no good or bads, only a mix, of which all of you take part of.' (as Odyssius groomed his wings) All around you, including me, are but figments of your vived imagination. A fantasy world, as you can say. A place where truth is so subjective, that your mind plays with it. A bit like reality actually' On which Brian responded: 'How can this be a dream, If I know everything is real! and if such beautifull things are given to me.' Odyssius said:' Well, if you decide to bring up beauty and reality for arguments of being awake, I suggest you wake up!' Brian: 'What?' ' Wake up!' Dais Odyssius as he threw a plate of purridge into Brian's face. |
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Re: The Greatest Story Ever Toldmartha said Sep 24, 2006, 8:22 PM: |
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leave behind the conjuring of Odysius, which echoed faintly and more faintly still somewhere behind him. “Where?” asked Brian, disoriented. The Crone’s powerful energy field and rose scents emerged on his left side. “I struck him down!” exclaimed the Crone. “He was not worthy!” “Who?” asked Brian. “She struck down Odysius, of course!” came the ringing voice and clear energy of Super Monad on his right side. “We are now three!” intoned the Crone and Super Monad together–and surprised, Brian felt his own voice, musical and confident, speaking with theirs as their syllables rang out throughout the |
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Re: The Greatest Story Ever Toldtinkonthebrink said Sep 27, 2006, 4:20 PM: |
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amphitheater. They stood before a crowd of people, some young, some |
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Re: The Greatest Story Ever Toldmartha said Sep 27, 2006, 10:03 PM: |
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“Impressive, isn't it?” said a clear and musical baratone voice almost in his left ear. He felt the warm breath of the speaker touch his skin, and perceived the words easily over the roar of the falls. He quickly turned to find Super Monad standing there with him, and in his hands, Super Monad held… |
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Re: The Greatest Story Ever Toldtinkonthebrink said Sep 28, 2006, 4:10 AM: |
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a small and oddly shaped package, wrapped in tattered fabric which couldn't have looked all that good in it's best days. Brian said “Brought your lunch, did you? Probably a good idea, I'm not sure the food here is agreeing with me, things have been kind of odd lately…” “It isn't my lunch,” interrupted SM, “this is for you. Use it carefully.” He handed the package off to Brian and as an afterthought added “By the way, keep it with you at all times and – don't eat it!” Brian looked down at the odd package in his hands, and when he glanced back up, SM was nowhere to be seen. The package was small and kind of flat, with an irregular shape to it. It could fit into a good-sized pocket, he thought, or tucked inside a shirt, or - oh well, there was no avoiding this part of the adventure, so he slowly folded back the worn fabric and found |
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Re: The Greatest Story Ever Toldtinkonthebrink said Sep 28, 2006, 9:51 AM: |
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Boy Brian unfolded the note carefully and and read: |
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Re: The Greatest Story Ever ToldAlex Chua said Sep 28, 2006, 1:02 PM: |
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What is reality? How do you know if you are awake or asleep? |
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Re: The Greatest Story Ever Toldtinkonthebrink said Sep 28, 2006, 2:09 PM: |
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and the spider seemed to be…chuckling. “Am I dreaming then, or is there any difference?” wondered Brian, and as he stared at the spider he realized it seemed to be growing quite a bit larger, and looking kind of lumpy and a little out of sorts, and then he realized he was looking into the face of the Crone, who laughed and said “It wouldn't be much of a secret if it was that easy, now would it?” |
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Re: The Greatest Story Ever ToldSee Doubleyou said Oct 4, 2006, 8:16 AM: |
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Then it hit him. He didn’t need words. Slowly, and quietly at first he began to whistle. The notes that flew from between his pursed lips were sweet, melodious, and certainly catchy. Little by little, he noticed those around him began to listen to his whistling. Then something happen, as if he were the Pied Piper of Hamelin, others began to pick up on his tune, and join in. Little by little the tune got louder and louder… |
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Re: The Greatest Story Ever Toldmartha said Oct 4, 2006, 10:06 PM: |
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and richer and deeper–not windy whistling now, but rich orchestral moaning, as if the people and the earth itself which nestled them, the trees and the grasses, the skies and the sunlight were reaching a sort of climax!!! But the sounds bursting together began to separate into harmonic groups– there were C and G, a fifth, here, and D and F, a third, and E and A, a fourth, and so on the intervals chimed from the throats of the crowd, the branches of the trees–even, it seemed, the wind itself. |
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Re: The Greatest Story Ever ToldNone [no longer around] said Oct 5, 2006, 6:43 AM: |
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“Only in dream.” |
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Re: The Greatest Story Ever Toldayla said Oct 5, 2006, 2:34 PM: |
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The Crone smiled gently, “And are you sure it was a dream?”…. |
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Re: The Greatest Story Ever Toldmartha said Oct 5, 2006, 10:29 PM: |
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And Brian found that he felt at this moment as if his heart had always longed to travel through the universe. He felt as if he, although a tiny, fragile human being, had somehow always been able to soar through the cosmos unimpeded, free! And yet, here he stood with his feet securely resting on the soft brown earth–but wait…. if this were a dream, then he would not actually be standing on the earth… |
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Re: The Greatest Story Ever Toldmartha said Nov 4, 2006, 8:29 PM: |
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“These are the true gifts of the Earth,” the Crone advised him. “You are grounded and connected through your flesh and your heart. One doesn’t learn to fly until one knows his connection to the ground.” The Crone’s eyes burned into his awareness. “If you do want to learn to fly, Brian, you must answer a question first: Why, why, why do you want to fly?” |
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Re: The Greatest Story Ever ToldMonad said Aug 3, 2007, 9:21 AM: |
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UN-PAUSE (from a 9 month break) |
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Re: The Greatest Story Ever ToldMonad said Jan 22, 2008, 10:25 AM: |
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THIS IS THE END OF THE STORY! |
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Re: The Greatest Story Ever Toldtinkonthebrink said Jan 22, 2008, 10:45 AM: |
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I can see how this would be odd after a nine month break, but here are a lot of great comments and a good explanation for someone just coming into all the recent events. |
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